Essay na temat: Boys and girls should be educated separately.

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Some people say that Boys and girls should be educated separately, because this help them in education. Do they have right?
At the beginning I present reasons for.
Firstly, Boys and Girls can have negative influence on each other, through sex difference.
Secondly, teachers can teach girls some things, which shouldn't hear boys and vice versa.
Thirdly, in single - sex boarding school students can be more concentrate on education than on loves.
On the other hand, boys can't learn how to talk with girls, so in the future boys might have problems in relations with girls and vice versa.
Moreover girls are better in other subject than boys, so they can help one another.
In addition, girls which don't have contacts with boys might going to be a feminist.
In conclusion, I think Boys and girls should be educated together, because in my opinion, learn how to live in society is more important than mark in the school.
Some people say that 'Boys' (dlaczego boys tutaj sa duza litera?) and girls should be educated separately, because this helpS (this-it-3os.l.poj - helps) them in education. Do they have IT right?
At the beginning I WILL present THE reasons for (ale czego musisz napisac).
Firstly, 'Boys' (male litery) and 'Girls' (popraw) can have negative influence on each other, through 'sex' (nie, nie slowo jest 'gender' sex to jest to co sie uprawia) differenceS.
Secondly, teachers can teach girls some things, which BOYS shouldn't hear 'boys' (w zlym miejscu) and vice versa. (mozesz dodac np jakich - bo to by bylo ciekawe)
Thirdly, in single - sex boarding school students can 'be more' (zle) concentrate MORE on education than on 'loves' (nie, tutaj nawet masz 3os.l.poj - ale slowo powinno byc ROMANCE).
On the other hand, (tyutaj napisz, ze to jest twoj reason for integration) boys can't learn how to talk with girls, so in the future boys might have problems in relations with girls and vice versa.
Moreover girls are better in 'other' SOME subject than boys, so they can help one another.
In addition, girls 'which' WHO (jak o ludziach to who) don't have contacts with boys might 'going to be' (zle, lepiej...end up being) 'a' (niepotr, bo masz 'girls') feministS.
In conclusion, I think boys and girls should be educated together, because in my opinion, THEY learn how to live in society WHICH is more important than A mark in the school.


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