Rozprawka Najlepiej rozumiemy się z osobami o podobnych do naszych cechach charakteru i zainteresowaniach

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Najlepiej rozumiemy się z osobami o podobnych do naszych cechach charakteru i zainteresowaniach. Napisz rozprawkę przedstawiającą i uzasadniającą Twoją opinię na ten temat.

Many people believe that friends should have the same interests and qualities because they will understand with each other better. I want to consider if it is proper or not. What are advantages and disadvantages of having similar hobbies and qualities?
Firstly I guess that people who have common interests are friends oftener. They have plenty subjects to talk which strengthen the bold. They spend more and more time together because if we are interested in some field we can do it and talk about it all the time.
Secondly I firmly believe that the same qualities make people friends more often than if they have contrary personalities. For example if human were shy he or she wouldn’t make friend with confident person. This would make person depressed because he or she want to be like friend which don’t lead to friendship.
On the other hand having the same hobbies would make conflict between friends. If the similar interests is for example tennis or other sport would make they compete with each other. The acquaintanceship will be in danger because one person is better than the other one.
Taking everything into account it’s hard to say if having the same hobbies and qualities encounter people to be friends or not. I guess that common interests will make people more close but this can also differ friends if they have other view on subject. Similar qualities are desirable thing but can also lead to conflict. In my opinion it depends from people if it will make them closer or not.

Many people believe that (tuytaj cos brak) friends should have the same interests and qualities because they will understand 'with' (po co to slowo tutaj jest? Dlaczego tlumaczysz z polskiego slowo w slowo?) each other better. I want to consider if it is 'proper' (to dokladnie znaczy co? to jest zle slowo tutaj) or not.
Firstly I guess that people who have common interests are friends 'oftener' (przekaz mi zrodlo w ktorym to slowo znalazlas). They have plenty (tu cos brak) subjects to talk (cos brak) which strengthen the 'bold' (zle slowo). They spend more and more time together because if 'we' (dlaczego 'they' a teraz 'we'?) are interested in some field we can 'do it' (nie rozumiem co to ma znaczyc) and talk about it all the time.
For example if (brak przedimka) 'human' (zle slowo) were shy he or she wouldn’t make 'friend' (zle slowo) with (cos brak) confident person. This would make (cos brak) person depressed because he or she 'want' (przeciez 'he' or 'she' to jest 3os.l.poj dlaczego czasownik nie jest dostosowany do tego?) to be like (cos brak) friend which 'don’t' (napisz w calosci) lead to friendship.
On the other hand having the same hobbies 'would' (jestes tego pewna?) make conflict between friends. If the similar interests 'is' (dlaczego interests-l. mnoga a wtedy masz is'l. poj?) for example tennis or other sport would make 'they' (zle slowo) compete with each other. The 'acquaintanceship' (zle slowo, nie pasuje do reszty) will be in danger because one person is better than the other one.
Taking everything into account it’s hard to say if having the same hobbies and qualities 'encounter' (nie jestem pewna czy to jest najlepsze slowo tutaj i zla koncowka) people to be friends or not. I guess that common interests will make people more close but this can also differ friends if they have other 'view' (tutaj ma byc l. mnoga) on subject. Similar qualities are (cos brak) desirable thing but can also lead to conflict. In my opinion it depends 'from' (zle slowo) people if it will make them closer or not.

The casual acquaintances can be dangerous,inappropriate ..itp

Dziękuję bardzo za tak wyczerpującą odpowiedź :) właśnie mam problem z pisaniem tego typu rzeczy, bo tlumacze dosłownie z polskiego moje myśli :)

Many people believe that the friends should have the same interests and qualities because they will understand each other better. I want to consider if it is right or not.
Firstly I guess that people who have common interests are friends more often. They have plenty of subjects to talk about which strengthen the bonds.
For example if the person were shy he or she wouldn’t form a freindship with a confident person. This would make this person depressed because he or she wants to be like the friend which do not lead to friendship.
On the other hand having the same hobbies will make conflict between friends. If the similar interests are for example tennis or other sport would make them compete with each other. The relationship will be in danger because one person is better than the other one.
Taking everything into account it’s hard to say if having the same hobbies and qualities will close people or not. I guess that common interests will make people more close but this can also differ friends if they have other views on subject. Similar qualities are the desirable thing but can also lead to conflict. In my opinion it depends on people if it will make them closer or not.


Czy juz jest ok? :)