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My name is Przemek. I from Rybnik. I graduated from Cracow University of Technology. I graduated from High school in Rybnik. My adventure bagan with mathematics at high school. The teacher told me I should be willing to learn more, because I am very capable. It get me thinking I worked very hard. The result was a finished exam at 95%. Later, I decided to study mathematics. I interested in analysis mathematical. After graduation I want to work in corporate related to finance. For example financial audit.
My level of English at intermediate estimate. But the words math is for me simple and I very fast learn.
I am from Rybnik
my adventure with mathematics began at high school
the teacher? hmm, może lepiej my maths teacher told me I should learn more (powinienem się wiecej uczyć)
it get (zła forma) me thinking <~~~nie rozumiem tego
the result was my finished exam...
I am interested in...
in a corporation?
my level of English is intermediate (hmm, are you sure?)
but the words math is for me simple (to jest źle)
I learn maths very fast
Cytat:
I interested in analysis mathematical.
poprawka j/w + szyk.
edytowany przez fui_eu: 19 paź 2013
Cytat:
my adventure with mathematics began at high school
ja bym dal inny preposition w miejsce at.
I learn maths very fast ...hmmm?? jakoś obco to mi brzmi ... to chyba nie ta kolokacja .Moze lepiej ' I learn very quickly, easily ..itp"
edytowany przez Robbertoxx: 19 paź 2013
kwestia stylistyczna, Robertoxx
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