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I'm sorry I haven't written for so long but I was really busy recently. I've got so much to tell you. You will not belive what happened. Last July we lived in England but then we moved to france and now we live near the pyreness. It is an adventure with lots of changes. as first i was difficult to start a new live here but i've already made loads of new friends and my french is fluent. It gets/is getting?? better every day. There are lots of differences between france and england. at my french school we don't have any uniforms. In england we had 200 people at my school and in my new french school tere are only 94. i also hae skiing lessons at school in france which can be/is?? different to pe lessons in england.
i like my new life style in france, because my new friend is nice, but i miss my english friend. i hope they come and visit me here.
how is your new school? i hope to hearing from you soon.
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Derar Sarah!
lsorry i [not write ] for so long,but i [ be ] relaly bussy recently. i have got so much to [tell] you. you [not believe ] what happened. last jukly we [live] in England but then we [move] to france and now we [ live ] near the Pyreness! it [ be ] an adventure with lots of changes. as first it [ be ] was difficult to start a new live here . but i [ already make ] loads of new friends and my french is fluent - it [get ] better everyday. there [be] lots of differences between France and England. At my French school we [ not have ] any uniforms. In England we [have] 200 pupuls, at my school and in my new French school there [ be ] only 95. I also have skiing lessons at school in France which [be] different to PE lessons in Englnd.
I like my new life style in France, beacuse my new firend [be] nice but i [miss ] my endlisch firend . i hope they [come ] and visit me here.
how is your new school? hope to [hear ] from you soon
przygoda trwa od tamtego momentu do teraz - zawlaszcza te zmiany dotycza przeszlosci do teraz, a nie przyszlosci

present continuous z better

ostatnie źle

mnostwo literowek

podejrzewam, z epod koniec chodzi o friends, nie friend, w dwoch przypadkach
Ale ogólnie to jest dobre? Tylko ta końcówka jest źle? Co tam ma byc?
jezeli to bylo cwiczenia na wstawianie czasow, to jest ok.

co na koncu - szukaj sama
miałem wstawić czasowniki z nawiasów w odpowiedniej formie. " i also have skiing lessons at School in France which IS different to PE lessons in England" - dobrze jest to IS?

Anna was overwight, beacuse she could to eat a lot of food. When she grew taller ,she lost some kilograms. She aslo gives you some tips on what to do to staying healthy :

Dobrze?
is jest dobrze

could jest zle
zamiast kilograms napisz 'wagi'
ostatnie - zla forma
Tam będzie " hope to hear from you soon " oraz " what to do stay heathy "

Ale nie wiem co tam ma byc zamiast could :(

Now she thinks about weight being a model but she doesn't worry about it ,

to pierwsze about jest źle,nie? co tam na być?
tak, dwa razy bezokolicznik

about na pewno zle
To co tam,ma byc zamiast about i could.bo nie mogę wykminic:|
Anna was overweight, beacuse she could eat a lot of food.

Anna miała nadwagę ponieważ mogła dużo jeść
czy to zdanie brzmi dobrze po polsku? chyba nie



edytowany przez zielonosiwy: 02 mar 2014
tam ma byc 'to', rozumiem, że tego slowa nie mozna zmienic.
No nie brzmi,ale nie mogę wykminic co tam wstawic Tak samo jak przy tym about pierwszym
Only to eat?
"miala nadwage, bo ... duzo jesc"
Ale like to eat?
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