Sprawdzenie Request Letter

Green Earth 10,
Hamilton House
Heslington
London
3th May, 2014

The Headmaster
St Paul’s Secondary School
Heslington
London

Dear Mr. Hills,
I am writing on behalf of Chełmianka Football Club, to request that you be so kind as to permit us to use St Paul’s Secondary School facilities. Our football team was looking for the help everywhere but our requests were rejected, and you are our last stand. Chełmianka Football Club need your help.
As amateurs, we cannot afford commercial gym facilities due to financial reasons. We would like to develop and become better imminently but it would be impossible without special facilities which are available at your school. School facilities feature well-equipped gym, swimming pool and modern football stadium which would help enormously in further team development.
What is more, I would like to mention the fact that many team members are former students of St Paul’s Secondary School. Most of them represented the school in many prestigious Olympiads like The International Mathematical Olympiad, The International Physics Olympiad, The International Chemistry Olympiad and The International Olympiad in Informatics which brought glory and fame to your school. I would also like to point out the fact that effort of one of our team members, John Locke, highly contributed to the obtainment of enormous government grants for school.
I would like to offer certain suggestions as to how such a permission would be of benefit to your school and how could we made the proper arrangement. Firstly, allow me to suggest that the team could train outside teaching hours; for example at weekends. Thanks to this solution, we would not disturb the school team. We could also train outdoors on evenings when gym is used for clubs and then swap with them, when they finish their workouts.
In addition, I would like to mention another solution which could bring benefits, for both Chełmianka Football Club and St Paul’s Secondary School. I feel that school team might wish to train with our club, in order to develop abilities and this rivalry may raise the level of both teams and result in many successes in future. To stand still is to move back, I am sure that both football clubs would like to constantly develop and we can make it together, we can reach our peaks and become the best in the near future.
We would be delighted if you would consider the request mentioned in this letter and I would like to thank you in advance for your time and cooperation in this matter.

Yours sincerely,