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I use the computer every day. I have to check my e-mails, search useful information. I have a knowledge of computer programs, such as Microsoft Word, Microsoft Excel, Microsoft PowerPoint. I often use this programs while I’m studying, applying for a job, preparing some presentation. In addition, on my study I use some special computer programs for example AutoCAD. In my last job I spent a lot of time on working in a parking computer program. I verified if the system works good, printed parking tickets, scanned tickets to check. I filled and printed a facture for the clients as well. Overall, working on the computer gives me a lot of pleasure and isn’t difficult and oppressive for me.

In my last job I had to pay an attention to order on the parking. I watched the monitoring on-screen from the parking camera. I was connecting with the general security which it was in this building. If something went wrong for example I saw a drunk man, some vandals, I was connecting with the security by intercom to said them about this accident. I had to be carefully all the time. This job required from me responsibility.

I like help in the kitchen. It’s fascinating process of growing the food for me. I know about an order of food preparation. I like group working and I think that I can find out about some new meals from the chef. I’m conscientious and accurate in what I do. I always try to do my job the best what I can. I think that help to cook is very important duty because I am responsible for meals – very important part of human life.

I’m very energetic person. I like when everything is all right and clean and I don’t have trouble with maintenance the order. I can be responsible for dining hall. In my home I often deal with maintenance in the dining room. I have a predisposition to this job because I’m quick and skillful. I am pleased when I see all things on the table are all right - in appropriate position.

I have 'a' (niepotr) knowledge of computer programs, such as Microsoft Word, 'Microsoft' (niepotr) Excel, 'Microsoft' (niepotr) PowerPoint. I often use 'this' (ale to odnosi sie do l. poj - zmien) programs while 'I’m' (w calosci) studying, applying for a job, preparing 'some' (niepotr slowo, poniza wartosc prezentacji) presentationS. In addition, 'on' (prosze nie robic tej kalki z polskiego, tutaj DURING) my study I use 'some' (prosze nie uzywac slowo takich jak: some, a lot - to nic nie znaczy) special computer programs for example AutoCAD. In my last job I spent 'a lot of' (prosze poszukaj inne okreslenie) time on working in a parking computer program. I verified 'if the system works good' ((na poczatek, nie piszemy 'works good' tylko works well, a po drugie to musi byc w jez. biernym), printed parking tickets, scanned tickets to check. I 'filled' (nie rozumiem tego slowa) and printed a 'facture' (co to za slowo, czy masz na mysli 'invoice;) for the clients. 'as well' (niepotr). Overall, working 'on the' (niepotr - wyglada za bardzo 'po polsku' WITH) computer gives me 'a lot of' (inne okreslenie) pleasure and 'isn’t' (w calosci) difficult and oppressive for me.

In my last job I had to pay 'an' (niepotr) attention 'to order on the parking' (tego to calkowicie noe rozumiem). I 'watched the monitoring' (a dlaczego nie napisales 'monitored' ) on-screen from the parking camera. I 'was connecting' (connected) with the general security 'which' (niepotr) 'it' (niepotr) 'was' (niepotr) in this building. If something 'went wrong' (zle okreslenie, tutaj 'occurred') for example I saw a drunk man, some vandals, I 'was connecting' (connected) with the security by intercom 'to said' (po jakiemu to jest? za malo uwazales na lekcjach) TOLD/INFORMED them about this accident. I had to be 'carefully' (zla czesc mowy) all the time. This job required 'from me responsibility' (zla kol slow).

'I like help in the kitchen' (ja lubie gdy ktos pomaga mi w kuchni?) co to znaczy) . 'It’s' (w calosci) fascinating process of growing the food for me. I know about 'an' (zly przedimek) order of food preparation. I like group working and I think that I can 'find out about some' (ujmij to inaczej( new meals from the chef. 'I’m' (w calosci) conscientious and accurate in what I do. I always try to do my job the best 'what' (znowu ten polski wplywa jak Wisla tutaj...THAT) I can. I think that 'help to cook' (tego nie rozumiem, czy masz na mysli Helping to cook, albo helping the cook) is (przedimek) very important duty because I am responsible for meals – (przedimek) very important part of (przedimek) human life.

'I’m ' (w calosci) (przedimek) very energetic person. I like when everything is all right and clean and I don’t have trouble with mainteNING the order. I can be responsible for (przedimek) dining hall. In my home I often deal with maintenance 'in' OF the dining room. I have a predisposition to this job because 'I’m' (w calosci) quick and skillful. I am pleased when I see THAT all things on the table are all right - in appropriate position.

Trovche to czyta sie tak jak maslo maslane - zrob to jeszcze raz i teraz 'sprzedaj sie przekonynujaco' a nie tak 'byle jak'....

... stosujemy :'search FOR something' : jesli 'szukamy czegoś'..,..'on - screen' ?? co to znaczy ? nie spotkalem się z czyms takim dotychczas )

Dzięki wielkie za pomoc. Poprawione. Wszystko teraz w porządku?

I use the computer every day. I have to check my e-mails, search for useful information. I have knowledge of computer programs, such as Microsoft Word, Excel, PowerPoint. I often use these programs while I am studying, applying for a job, preparing presentations. During my study I use special computer programs for example AutoCAD. In my last job I spent a great deal of time on working in a parking computer program. I verified if the system was worked well, printed parking tickets, scanned tickets to check. I issued and printed invoice for the clients. Overall, working with computer gives me huge pleasure and is not difficult and oppressive for me.

In my last job I had to pay attention to maintain order in underground parking. I monitored on the screen from the parking camera. I connected with the general security in this building. If something occurred for example I saw a drunk man, some vandals, I connected with the security by intercom informed them about this accident. I had to be careful all the time. This job required responsibility from me.

I like to help in the kitchen. It is fascinating process of growing the food for me. I know about in order of food preparation. I like group working and I think that I can see how cook new meals from the chef. I am conscientious and accurate in what I do. I always try to do my job the best that I can. I think that helping the cook is a very important duty because I am responsible for meals – a very important part of a human life.

I am very energetic person. I like when everything is all right and clean and I don’t have trouble with maintening the order. I can be responsible for a dining hall. In my home I often deal with maintenance of the dining room. I have a predisposition to this job because I am quick and skillful. I am pleased when I see that all things on the table are all right - in appropriate position.

Mogę jeszcze liczyć na Waszą pomoc? Mam nadzieję, że będzie mniej błędów.

I have a big experience in dishwashing. I often share duties in the kitchen with my flatmate in Warsaw. We have an agreement and we share dishwashing to us. The one who preparing the meals is exempt from washing. In my opinion I am a very good with this job. I washing fast and precisely.

I like preparing meals. It gives me a huge fun. I often help to my mother in the kitchen. When I am at home I try to prepare some dishes to my all family. I like to search for the Internet to find a special recipes. Lately, I come across salmon pasta recipe. It was an interesting tasting experience. I am opened for the new flavors.

I make an assumption that order in the kitchen is duty. Before always I eat some meals, I clean my kitchen. I hate when the kitchen is dirty. I often clean the kitchen because I like it. Not only when I prepare some meals but more often. During the cleaning I am precise and quite fast. Kitchen is the place when people spend a lot of time daily so it is required to systematic cleaning.

After the meals I often clean table, especially when my mum or dad cooked. In this time I take back all the dishes to sink. I accurate cleaning table. I am so good in this because I am deft and nimble. I always care to accurately clean table so that on the table doesn’t stay some waste. Overall I like when the table is clean.

I am a clever and familiar with the manual work. I had learned a lot of useful things when I helped to my father. He is a carpenter. I often work with him on holiday. Overall, when something breaks my father fix it and I help to him. I think that I am good in a small repairs.

I am really like care for greenery. I live in the village and in this place I have an opportunity moving the lawn. This work is truly a hobby for me. I am really good with this job. We can say that I am a lawn enthusiast. At my allotment I trimming the hedges, pulling weeds between the beds. I can planting a flowers too. Especially I like when the garden is well-kept.

Overall I like cleaning. In my home to my duties belongs toilet cleaning. Really it makes me pleasure. I am enjoy when everything in the bathroom and toilet was cleaned. I always prepare to cleaning: put on special gloves. I am quick in this job. I do not like waste my time. Generally I like keeping everything in order. I am observant and I can quickly to react when something is dirty.

I have a 'big' (nie, nie uzywaj takiego slowa, lepiej 'a varied') experience in 'dishwashing' (lepiej washing dishes).
We have an agreement and we share (daj tutaj przedimek) dishwashing 'to us' (dla nas? nie rozumeim). The one who 'preparing' (zle slowo) the meals is exempt from washing. In my opinion I am 'a' (po co to?) very good with this job. I 'washing' (zla czesc mowy) fast and precisely.

It gives me 'a' (wg mnie niepotr) huge fun. When I am at home I try to prepare some dishes 'to' (zle slowo, tutaj ma byc 'dla' - FOR) my all family. I like to search 'for' (zle slowo,) the Internet to find 'a' (nie dawaj 'a' przed l. mnoga) special recipes. Lately, I 'come' (zle slowo, tutaj 'came') across (brak przedimka) salmon pasta recipe.
I am opened 'for' (nei, to masz zle, tutaj TO) 'the' (ja bym dala 'any') new flavors.

I make an assumption that order in the kitchen is 'duty' (to jest zle slowo). 'Before always' (zla kolejnosc slow) I eat some meals, I clean my kitchen. I hate (ja dalabym IT) when the kitchen is dirty.
(przedimek) kitchen is the place 'when' (zle slowo) people spend a lot of time daily so it is 'required' (mnie sie wydaje zle slowo) to systematic cleaning.

After the meals I often clean (przedimek) table, especially when my mum or dad (daj tutaj 'have') cooked. 'In' (zle slowo) this time I take back (ale z jakiego miejsca) all the dishes to (przedimek) sink. I 'accurate' (zle slowo,) 'cleaning' (zle slowo) (przedimek) table.
I always care to 'accurately' (nie, to slowo nie pasuje do 'cleaning' moze 'precisely') clean table so that on the table 'doesn’t' (daj w calosci) stay 'some' (daj sloeo 'any') waste.

I am 'a' (jak dajesz przedimek, to musisz dac rzeczownik, jest takie okreslenie 'a clever dick' - tak, ze lepiej nie dawaj przyimka) clever and familiar with 'the' (niepotr) manual work. I had learned a lot of useful things when I helped 'to' (po co to slowo tutaj masz?) my father.
Overall, when something breaks my father 'fix' (nie, tu powinno byc, father-he-3os.l.poj he fixes it) and I help 'to' (co to masz z tym slowem?) him. I think that I am 'good' (to dla mnie nic nie znaczy, lepiej napisac 'practical') in 'a' (dlaczego dajesz przyimek przed l. mnoga?) small repairs.

I am really like 'care' (nie, napisz 'taking care') 'for' (zle slowo) greenery. I live in the village and in this place I have an opportunity 'moving' (nie, tutaj ...to..) the lawn.
At my allotment I 'trimming' (nie, tutaj 'trim') the hedges, 'pulling' (popraw wg mojej wskazowki) weeds between the beds. I can 'planting' (plant) 'a' (niepotr) flowers too. 'Especially I like' (zla kol slow...I like esp.) when the garden is well-kept.

In my home to my duties belongs 'toilet' (napisz 'bathroom') cleaning. Really it 'makes' (nie, po ang. nie robi a 'daje' gives - nie pisz tak strasznie po polsku bo tereaz uzywasz jez. ang. - to musisz sie dostosowac do ang. mentalnosci) me pleasure. I 'am' (po co to 'am' - ja jestesm? co jak?) enjoy when everything in the bathroom and toilet 'was' (zly czas, tutaj teraz IS) cleaned. I always prepare 'to' (zle slowo, tutaj FOR) cleaning: (tutaj brakuje kto? - mozna napisac 'and') put on special gloves.
I do not like TO waste my time.
I am observant and I can quickly 'to' (prosze popracowac cos nad tym, piszesz slowo 'to' gdzie jego nie trzeba, a tam gdzie trzeba jego niema) react when something is dirty.

Dzięki wielkie. Mam jeszcze trochę tego.

I apply for a Camp America for several reasons. Firstly, I’d like to work with new conditions and I want to take an assessment in new surroundings. I count on working with friendly atmosphere. Secondly, I would like to meet a lot of new, interesting people from different countries. I hope that I will make a lasted relation. Next, I would like see new country where I haven’t been yet. For a long time I’m fascinated by USA. I’m interested in American’s history. In this country only I can see so mixed cultures. For ages I’m keen on Americans filmography. When I will come to USA I can see on my own eyes some places which I know only from movies.

I'm studying at Wroclaw University of Environmental and Life Sciences. By now I obtained a degree of engineer of environmental. I have got a younger sister. Now I spend most of the time in Warsaw. My family live in the village about 70 kilometers from the city. I think, that my relationship with them are really good. We often talk by phone and I visit them when I have a free time. I'm a sport enthusiast. I'm keen on soccer, volleyball, squash and badminton. Now, the most time I devote to play squash. This game is great for me. I like to watch a sports events on TV. I saw all Football Championships, Olympic Games and other important events. I’m interested in movies. I usually spend my free time on watching movies. My favorite movie is “Apocalypse Now”, directed by F.F. Coppola from 1978. Overall I really like Americans filmography. In my opinion it’s the best on the world. I am not a lazy man. I always do something. When I was younger I helped to my father in his job. So I was working as a carpenter’s assistant. This work has been me a lot of experience. I improved my manual skills and I was responsible for my work. During my job as tradesman and car park employee, I had a direct contact with clients. I’m a communicative person and I’m sympathetic towards anyone. Especially, in the job in car park had to be patient, systematic. This job was really challenging for me. But, I like when I can count on myself.

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