Artykul do gazetki szkolnej.. opisz dzien swojej przeprowadzki..

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witam i proszę czy ktoś może sprawdzić, poprawić błędy w moim zadaniu???

We moved to a new house. We found a fantastic area. My new house look amazing. I was excited, when i saw it.
This area and neighbour are very helpful and nice. We have a big garden . When we moved was big mess. We lost our key. I was frightened. We looked everywhere. We sat on the floor and we were very sad.
My boyfriend asked me, what we doing now?
Outside run my dog. When i gone to walk with her my pupil run under my car. I didn't know what she do.
Suddenly, my sweet, lovely girl come to me with my key from our home.
I love my dog Leyla and I think this house is the best place to live in my world.
Cytat: gabrysia3103
witam i proszę czy ktoś może sprawdzić, poprawić błędy w moim zadaniu???

We moved to a new house. We found a fantastic area. My new house look ZLA FORMA CZASOWNIKA amazing. I was excited, when i WIELKA LITERA saw it.
This area and neighbour JEDEN? are very helpful and nice. We have a big garden . When we moved BRAK PODMIOTU was big mess. We lost our key. I was frightened. We looked everywhere. We sat on the floor and we were very sad.
My boyfriend asked me, what we doing now? NAPISZ 'CO POWINNISMY ZROBIC'
Outside run ZLY SZYK I ZLA FORMA CZASOWNIKA my dog. When i gone TO NIE JEST FORMA SIMPLE PAST to walk with her my pupil<-UCZEN run ZLA FORMA under my car. I didn't know what she do CO ONA ROBIC.
Suddenly, my sweet, lovely girl come ZLA FORMA to me with my key from our home.
I love my dog Leyla and I think this house is the best place to live in my world.
dziekuje za poprawki.. napisze to jeszcze raz starałam się poprawić, mam nadzieje ze wszystko mi się udało:)..

We moved to a new house. We found a fantastic area.
My new house looked amazing. I was excited, when I saw it.
This area and neighbours are very helpful and nice. We have a big garden.
When we moved to a new home was big mess. We lost our key.
I was frightened. We looked everywhere. We sat on the floor and we were very sad.
My boyfriend asked me, what we doing now? My dog ran outside.
When I went to walk with her my dog ran under my car. I didn't know what she doing.
Suddenly, my sweet, lovely girl came to me with me key from our home.
I love my dog Leyla and I think this house is the best place to live in my world.
When we moved to a new home TUTAJ NADAL BRAK PODMIOTU was big mess.
My boyfriend asked me, what we ZUPELNIE NIEGRAMATYCZNE doing now?
I didn't know what she NIEGRAMATYCZNE doing.
Suddenly, my sweet, lovely girl came to me with mY key from our home.
This area and neighbours are very helpful and nice. może 'rozbij' że np. okolica jest ładna i sąsiedzi są helpful...
edytowany przez Aaric: 27 lut 2015
Dziekuje mg za poprawki ale nie mam pojecia jak to poprawic...

Aaric dzieki wielkie... ale nie mam juz czasu zeby cos dopisywac...

WIELKIE DZIEKUJE
there was
we were doing
she was doing
jak to nie wiesz? Np,. w drugim mialas napisac ' co powinnismy zrobic'.
Dziekuje bardzo zielonosiwy:)
dziekuje za wszystkie poprawki
edytowany przez gabrysia3103: 27 lut 2015
nie rozumiem argumentu. Napisz tak, jak mowie, bo na razie jest zle.
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