Mowa zależna- czy może mi ktoś sprawdzić parę zdań?

Na wstępie chciałbym się z wami przewitać.
Chciałbym też nadmienić, że od sprawdzianu do którego własnie się uczę zależy to czy zdam czy nie do następnej klasy

Zadanie 1
Przekształć zdania na mowę zależną, uzywając początków zdań

1-Can you work overtime?
They asked me whether i will could work overtime
2-Do you need me to help you with your homework?
My older brother asked whether i will need help with my homework
3-Don't leave this box in the hall
My mother told that wouldn't leave box in the hall
4-I have earned my first money today
Jane said that he has earned his first money today
5-will try to call you tomorrow
My boyfirend told he would call to me tomorrow
6-Somebody is following us
They said that somebody was went following us
7-Did you finish school two hours ago?
Dad wanted that i will finish school two hours ago

Zadanie 2
Przetłumacz fragmenty podane w nawiasach na język angielski, tak aby otrzymać logiczne i poprawne zdania gramatyczne
1.Why didn't you tell us that were sold all tickets the week before?
2.The teacher asked me taht i will report all about the history test
3.Robert said he that will not come to my birthday party
4.The boss asked why i was late to work the day before
5.She told me she going to alone paint wall
6.The headteacher wanted to know whether all parents are happy with their children's exam results
7.Auntie Gina said us that we don't shout at each other
8.She asked me whether i saw already the new film with Tom Cruise
9.The teacher asked the students that don't cheat during the test
10.Mom asked me when i going to clean up my room

Proszę o sprawdzenie oraz pokazanie ewentualnych błędów
Pozdrawiam

nie powtorzyles mowy zaleznej
popleniasz bledy dotyczace nastepstwa czasow, a nawet podstawowych konstukrcji
Poczytaj sobie np. tu: https://www.ang.pl/gramatyka/mowa-zalezna

zwroc uwage na nastepstwo czasow, a takze na wyrazanie polecen w mowie zaleznej. Popraw zdania, a potem pogadamy.

1 zad -wszystkie zle,w 5 jest dobry czas, ale musisz zamienic tomorrow na cos innego
w 2 zad tez nie jest najlepiej

Nie powtórzyłem, bo nigdy jej nie umiałem i tu jest własnie największy problem :P
Dzięki za rady, posiedzę nad tym jeszcze, pozmieniam i wrzucę od nowa :)

1-Can you work overtime?
They asked me whether i could work overtime
2-Do you need me to help you with your homework?
My older brother asked whether i needed help with my homework
3-Don't leave this box in the hall
My mother told that i am to leave box in the hall
4-I have earned my first money today
Jane said that he had earned their first money today
5-will try to call you tomorrow
My boyfirend told he would call to me following day
6-Somebody is following us
They said that somebody was went following us
7-Did you finish school two hours ago?
Dad wanted that i was finished school two hours ago

Możecie teraz do tego spojrzeć?
Ps. Jak przetlumaczyć zdanie 6?

"I" wielką literą
2 troche uprosciles
3 zle, powtorz temat 'polecenia w mowie zaleznej'
4 today tez trzeba odpowiedni zamienic
5 tell ma swoje wymagania gramatyczne, a poza tym zapomniales o 'try' i jeszcze brakuje przedimka pod koniec
6 wymyslasz slowa, ktorych tam nie bylo
7 zastanow sie nad tym 'wanted' na poczatku, ale przede wszystkim dales zly czas i nic nie zrobiles z ago

ps. sprawdz sobie w slowniku zdanie nr 6

1-Can you work overtime?
They asked me whether I could work overtime
2-Do you need me to help you with your homework?
My older brother asked whether i will needed help with my homework
3-Don't leave this box in the hall
My mother told me not to leave box in the hall
4-I have earned my first money today
Jane said that he had earned their first money that day
5-will try to call you tomorrow
My boyfirend told he would call to me following day
6-Somebody is following us
They said We are being followed.
7-Did you finish school two hours ago?
Dad wanted that I would finish school two hours before

A teraz? :D

2 teraz jest niegramatycznie
5 po 'told' musi byc napisane, komu powiedzial. Poza tym usun slowo, ktorego nie bylo w srodku zdania wyjsciowego
6 a nastepstwo czasow?
7 zle, zly czas. podpowiedz: na poczatku bedzie "...wanted to know if...'

jest coraz lepiej. pracuj dalej.

2-Do you need me to help you with your homework?
My older brother asked whether i needed help with my homework
5-will try to call you tomorrow
My boyfirend told me that he would call to me following day
6-Somebody is following us
They said We were being followed.
7-Did you finish school two hours ago?
Dad wanted to know if I come back from school two hours before


Poprawiłem też zadanie 2
1.Why didn't you tell us that all tickets have been sold the week before?
2.The teacher asked me that I informed everyone about the history test
3.Robert said he that couldn't come to my birthday party
4.The boss asked why i was late to work the day before
5.She told me she going to alone paint wall
6.The headteacher wanted to know whether all parents are happy with their children's exam results
7.Auntie Gina said us that we don't shout at each other
8.She asked me whether i saw already the new film with Tom Cruise
9.The teacher asked the students that don't cheat during the test
10.Mom asked me when i am going to clean up my room

2 jest tak jak w pierwszej wrrsji - gramatycznie poprawne, ale niezgodne ze zdaniem wyjsciowym
5 nie poprawiles wszystkiego
7 zly czas i czemu zmieniles czasownik

a to drugie zadanie?

nie wiem, co bylo w nawiasach
1. zly czas
2 to jest polecenie
4 zly czas
5 zupelnie zle
6 zly czas
7 to jest polecenie
8 zly czas
9 zupelnie zle
10 zly czas

Pomęcze Cię jeszcze mg :)

Drugie zadanie, poprawiłem
1.Why didn't you tell us that (all tickets were sold) the week before?
2.The teacher asked me (that I inform everyone) about the history test
3.Robert said he (that couldn't come) to my birthday party
4.The boss asked why (i was late to work) the day before
5.She told me she (that alone going to paint wall)
6.The headteacher wanted to know (whether all parents were happed with) their children's exam results
7.Auntie Gina (told us not to shout ) at each other
8.She asked me (whether i was watching already) the new film with Tom Cruise
9.The teacher asked the students (that to not cheats) during the test
10.Mom asked me (when i was going to cleaned up) my room

w nawiasie wpisywałem sam

3 6 7 jest ok
reszta do poprawy

i naprawde przemysl, zanim cos napiszesz

1.Why didn't you tell us that (all tickets have been sold) the week before?
2.The teacher asked me (I information everybody ) about the history test
3.Robert said he (that couldn't come) to my birthday party
4.The boss asked why (i lated to work) the day before
5.She told me she (that is alone going to paint wall)
6.The headteacher wanted to know (whether all parents were happed with) their children's exam results
7.Auntie Gina (told us not to shout ) at each other
8.She asked me (whether I watched already) the new film with Tom Cruise
9.The teacher asked the students (that to aren't cheats) during the test
10.Mom asked me (when I am going to clean up) my room

Jak to teraz wygląda?

tak samo.
Po co w ogole piszesz nowe wersje, skoro nie chce Ci sie zajrzec do regulek. Marnujesz moj czas.

do regułek zaglądam, tylko ciężko nauczyć się całego angielskiego w parę minut...

jaki caly angielski? masz cwiczenie z mowy zaleznej, nastepstwa czasow i na tym sie skoncentruj. Nie stoujesz zasad, ktore stosowales wczoraj. Nie chce Ci sie.

No cały bo nie znam czasów nawet, a zaliczyć ten test musze, mam go we wtorek :/

1.Why didn't you tell us that (these all was tickets solded) the week before?
2.The teacher asked me (whether I had informed everybody) about the history test
4.The boss asked why (i had lated to work) the day before
5.She told me she (that she is alone going to paint wall)
8.She asked me (whether I watched already) the new film with Tom Cruise
9.The teacher asked the students (that they don't cheats) during the test 
10.Mom asked me (when I am going to clean up) my room

1 jest gorzej, czemu zmienasz wszystko, kiedy miales tylko zmienic czas
2 ok
4 late to jest przymiotnik; spoznic sie = be late
5 brak nastepstwa czasow
8 zly czas
9 to bylo polecenie
10 brak nastepstwa czasow

i co, ile razy jeszcze nie przeczytasz regulek? Ja mam juz dosc