Dzień dobry, proszę o sprawdzenie listu formalnego z matury rozszerzonej (poziom B2/C1). Limit słów to 200-250, więc się zgadza :)
Dodatkowo prosiłabym w miarę możliwości o ocenienie w kryteriach:
- zgodność z poleceniem 0-5
- spójność i logika wypowiedzi 0-2
- bogactwo językowe 0-3
- poprawność językowa 0-3
Z góry dziękuję i pozdrawiam.
Ubiegasz się o posadę opiekunki sześcioletniego dziecka u brytyjskiej rodziny. Napisz list formalny, w którym przedstawisz siebie i swoje zalety oraz wyjaśnisz dlaczego to właśnie ty powinnaś dostać tę pracę.
Dear Mr. Jones
With reference to your advert in the current issue of local newspaper, I am writing to apply for the position of babysitter.
I am 18 years old and last month I finished middle school. In four months I will start studing at University in Warsaw, however I decided to go abroad during my holidays. Now I am living in Stratford. Language barrier is not a problem for me, because I was studing English on advanced level in school for couple years and because of that I can easily comunicate.
I my opinion, I am ideal person for this position. I am young, full of ideas and always smiled. I have a lot of energy to play with kids. In addiction, I am very responsible and dutiful.
Besides, I really like cooking, so it is not a problem for me to cook during the day. I can also help with other housework.
I have a lot of experience with working with kids. In Poland, I was giving maths particular lessons and during last holidays I was a guardian on youth camp. I am keen on spending time with children.
I appreciate consideretion of my request. I enclose also my CV. Look forward to hearing form you.
Yours sincerely,
XYZ