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Hi everyone! Guess what! I've found a holiday job!
My new job is easy. I work in restaurant in Rowy. I work from 9 a.m. to 5 p.m. I must wash glasses, clean tables and floors. I have a nice boss. She's calm and helpful. In the free time I go running or I go with my new friend swimming in the sea.
Do you looking for a job? If were you, I would try looking for in the newspapers. I found my holidays job in the newspaper. In advert was a lot of offers a holiday job.
Often teenagers looking for a holiday job because they need a money for driving licence. In my opinion a job learn teenagers independence, better language a English and well-organised. This is a good on the future.
Have you got any experience with a holiday job? I would be thrilled to hear from you in that
I'm sure you'll have more stories like mine.
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I must wash glasses, clean (tutaj dalabym przedimka) tables and (przedimek) floors.
In 'the' (zamiast 'the' daj slowo 'my') free time I go running or I go with my new friend swimming in the sea.
'Do' (nie, to jest zle, przeczytaj o uzywaniu tego operatora, tutaj ARE) you looking for a job? If were you, I would try looking for (cos tutaj brak) in the newspapers.
In (przedimek) advert was a lot of offers OF a holiday job.
Often teenagers 'looking' (tu masz zle slowo, ma byc 'look') for a holiday job because they need 'a' (co to jest? niepotr) money for (brak przedimka) driving licence (or something else) . In my opinion a job 'learn' (nie, nie, nie. A student learns, a job TEACHERS, a teacher TEACHERS) teenagers independence, better language 'a' (tego calkowicie nie rozumiem) English and BEING well-organised. This is a good 'on' (znowu ta kalka z polskiego 'na'. Tak nie piszemy po ang. Tu ma byc FOR) the future.
I would be thrilled to hear from you'in' (tutaj wlasnie ma byc ON) that

Zrob cos z tymi przedimkami (a, an, the)

nie, nie, nie. A student learns, a job TEACHERS, a teacher TEACHERS Really? ;)

kochanie, przeciez widzisz ze to byla literowka, bo bylam wkurzona, ze ludzie pisza zle. A teacher teaches, ...ale wiedzialam, ze ty to akurat masz mnie na oku, i sprawdzisz wszystko co ja napisze. Przez to akurat, wszyscy teraz beda to pamietac. A student learns, a teacher teaches.

In the free time I go running or I go with my new friend swimming in the sea. ja bym zmienił szyk.

teaches ...teenagers ...BEING well-organised. ja bym dał 'to be'