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In my opinion, it should not be a camp for computer addiction in Poland, because I think that a level of computer addiction in my country is not dangerous and we can live without internet.
The appropriate number of hours in front of a computers about two to three hours. I think that in this time peroid we can find all needful informations and rest of time we can spend on teaching or with familly.
Spend more than three hours in front of a computer is too long in one day in my opinion.
I use computer to searching information to school and also I write messagess with my friends and familly which live far away. Internet is also way to spend free time. In the internet we can buy products, play in games and do more interesting things.


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In my opinion, it should not be a camp for computer addiction in Poland, because I think that a level of computer addiction in my country is not dangerous and we can live without internet.
The appropriate number of hours in front of a computer is about two to three hours. I think that in this time we can find all needful informations and rest of our time we can spend on teaching or with familly.
Spend more than three hours in front of a computer is too long in one day in my opinion.
I use computer to searching information to school and also I write messagess with my friends and familly which live far away. Internet is also way to spend free time. In the internet we can buy products, play in games and do more interesting things.

there should not...
oboz dla uzaleznienia od komputera?
przed level i Internet przedimek okreslony
informacje sa niepoliczalne po angielsku. Napisz 'informacje, ktorych potrzebujemy'
teaching = uczenie, usun 'on', 'on' odnosi sie do wydawania pieniedzy
kolejne zdanie; pierwszy wyraz ma byc 'spedzanie'
dalej: przed computer the albo my
uzyc do = inny przyimek, nie 'to'
family to ludzie, o ludziach nie powiesz which
a way
po angielsku sie mowi 'na internecie'
grac w cos - bez przyimka

Dziękuje bardzo serdecznie i zyczę miłego wieczoru mg!