Proszę o pilną pomoc w sprawdzeniu pracy

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Bardzo proszę o pomoc w sprawdzeniu pracy, sprawa pilna bo od tego zależy moje zaliczenie a nie stety poprawiam mnóstwo błędów, których samej mi ciężko zauważyć. Temat pracy to biografia J. K. Rowling.


J. K. Rowling properly Joanne Rowling the English writer, her early career gave a clear indication of her later writing success despite a lot of defeats and of failures in her life which they contributed to recognise her as the most famous a writer XXI century of a young generation. The first serious failure was met her when she was a teenager because she was not admitted to college when her parents very much wanted it. Next, her mother died when the writer had 25 years what she very survive, at that time, she fell into depression, which contributed to the miscarriage of her first child, this the misfortune break her down. Two years later she met her first husband with which she took wedding in the 1992 year. A year later she born her first baby, daughter Jessica. Her wonderful husband how she thought, he proved to be quite different, abused on her and often beat her. Their marriage did not survive two years, Joanne filed for divorce in the court of fault her husband. Despite, as a young, alone and unemployment mother, she was must live with the help of social welfare. In this time the writer did not saw a sense her life and she wanted to commit suicide at age 30, but after the therapy treatment of depression in the clinic, she was found herself a power to start to fulfil her dreams, to become a writer. A year later would publish her first the famous on all over the world a book about a young wizard, which achievement very fast success. Four years later, released four next parts adventures about Harry Potter, which cause that she became an author of the year, having sold 11 million copies of her new book at age 42. At present, Joanne Kathleen Rowling is one of the richest women on British Islands and Harry Potter became a global brand, worth more than $15 billion dollars. On the example experiences of fate J. K. Rowling, we should never to doubt in ours dreams, despite a lot of defeats, we can achieve success in young age.
The first serious failure was met her when she was a teenager because she was not admitted to college when her parents very much wanted it. Next, her mother died when the writer had 25 years what she very survive, at that time, she fell into depression, which contributed to the miscarriage of her first child, this the misfortune break her down. Two years later she met her first husband with which she took wedding in the 1992 year. A year later she born her first baby, daughter Jessica.
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edytowany przez Aaric: 05 cze 2017
A jak to dokładnie poprawić.
nie poprawisz tego, bo to nie jest na twoj poziom
Otworzyć podręcznik, słownik itp
np w ang jest różnica miedzy 'urodzić się' i 'urodzić dziecko'.
Wiem, że to nie jest mój poziom, dlatego proszę o pomoc :/
ktoś zawalił - albo nauczyciel, ze zadal za trudny temat, albo ty, ze taki sobie wybralas
Dajmy na to że ktoś ci wszystkie błędy poprawi, zaliczysz pracę i wciąż nie bedziesz wiedziała co jest grane. Nie widzisz w tym problemu?
Sprobuj poprawić "when the writer had 25 years". To są podstawy;)))
poprawnie będzie - when she was 25 years
A to?
the writer did not saw
did not see - ale wstyd, nie wiem jak ja tego nie zauważyłam :(
poprawnie będzie - when she was 25 years właściwie będzie bez 'years' albo 'years old'
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