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A good example?

Every person has favourite celebrities who frequently are our role model. Are you one of those people who do everything to look like them? Do you find that famous people are flawless?

Lucas Cooper is one of the most popular actor in the world. Not only is he teenager's idol but also he's using his fame and money to help others. He seems to be a very charitable and cheerful person. But if he is he like that certainly?

Take last award ceremony in Los Angeles where the golden statuettes for the most remarkable film star were handed. Johny Deep received the major prize for his engagement in fighting the poverty in Africa. All participants and spectators of this event were really cheerful and touched by his speech. Most people. Lucas Cooper was an excpetion. The first thing he did was to boo at the winner off. He followed that by insulting his manager. He was behaving very improperly because he was sure that the reward is his. It's hard to believe but then he destroyed the decorations and walked out of the award ceremony. Everybody was shocked his response and behaviour.

This situation shows that celebrities are not a perfect people. They are also weakness. In my opinion he shouldn't show disrespect for his fellow professional and fans because he's and admired public figure.

To sum up I feel very strongly that celebrities should behave decently. They ought to show others how we can be a good egg. We have to ask ourselves a question how celebrities have responsibilities towards young people. They should teach us responsibility four our's own faults, open-mindedness, loyalty and happiness which give as small things and overcoming our weaknesses. Their life and achievements should indicate us that due to hard work and determination we can do impossible and puruse our dreams.

A good example?

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This situation shows that celebrities are not a PRZED LICZBA MNOGĄ? perfect people. They are also weakness SĄ SŁABOŚCIĄ?. In my opinion he shouldn't show disrespect for his fellow professional and fans because he's and LITEROWKAD admired public figure.

To sum up I feel very strongly that celebrities should behave decently. They ought to show others how we can be a good egg CZYLI?. We have to ask ourselves a question how celebrities have responsibilities JAK MAJĄ OBOWIĄZKI? towards young people. They should teach us responsibility four our's ZASTANOW SIE own faults, open-mindedness, loyalty and happiness which give ZLA FORMA as ZLE SLOWO small things and overcoming CZEMU FORMA Z ING our weaknesses. Their life and achievements should indicate TO us that due to WITH hard work and determination we can do PRZEDIMEK impossible and puruse LITERKI SIE PRZESTAWILY our dreams.

Not only is he teenager's idol but HE also IS he's using his fame and money to help others.
The first thing he did was to USUN 'TO' boo at the winner.

, and yet they are often weak ones ...czy coś tam coś tam ;)

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