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What is most important in achieving professionalism at work as an interior designer?
Professional experience is undoubtedly the basis for success in the interior designer's work. But before we achieve the professional success, we should learn to choose the best team of qualified professionals with whom we will work. We need to learn relevant ethical, environmental and safety and health reasons, and learn how to plan and control budget and try to improve our way of working to make it faster and more effective.
First of all, choosing plumber, painter or producer of curtains and furniture should base on their previous work, professionalism and a good portfolio. Before signing a legally binding contract, it is good to see their anterior jobs and assess whether we need precisely this. In the case of a big project, we can prepare a tender document and send it to three builders with a good reputation. Good cooperation and communication ensure a good result and effectiveness of the project.
Another point is that we can not underestimate the importance of protecting the health and safety of employees and clients, because we are responsible for it. Appropriately installed electrical and hydraulic installations comply with health and safety regulations are provided by competent licensed contractors. Guaranteeing a comfortable and reasonable working time can significantly improve the project's efficiency. We should remember about the appropriate training of employees and inform clients about possible risks before starting work. If customers will live during construction works, it is good to do this work in some parts of the house at the same time or when no one will stay in the house. Children should be warned about all dangers and let's make sure they are not on the construction site. Otherwise, you can offer clients to move out from the house to the end of the renovation.
What seems to be not very important, when we decide to choose finishing, materials and furniture, we should pay attention to their composition because most of them may contain formaldehyde, heavy metals and volatile organic compounds. Waste recovery is also noteworthy. Important is to make contact with institutions and companies that can pick up from us, old furniture, books, newspapers, recycling. It is worth to learn how to upholstery and painting old furniture. This knowledge will help us in renewing the customer's furniture and thus save money that could spend on another worthless piece of furniture to our project.
Needless to say, the crucial issue in our work as an interior designer is to adjust the budget to the customer's needs and to explain to him that there is a vast difference in what is available on the market. After determining how much money customers want to spend, you should divide this money into floors, furniture, curtains, paints, decorating and accessories and add delivery time and assembly to this. In the bathrooms, we should make a detailed list of all units that will be needed and ask the plumber about the price of their assembly. The companies that sell kitchens can do the project. We have to make sure that we need to pay for this or it can be for free when we are ordering the kitchen. They also provide drawings plans and cost estimates related to the installation of a new kitchen. To the kitchen equipment elements, we must employ well-certified fitters. The installation or replacement of existing luminaires and accessories must always be carried out by a qualified electrician. In the beginning, we may ask these specialists for a quote.
In the budgeting of accessories, we make a preliminary list with the necessary additions, during the implementation of the project, we will be able to determine what else we can afford.
And lastly, to improve work, we should prepare a spreadsheet and a list of all the different design elements that we can use for each subsequent job. We always add a little more to the budget spending of about 10%. Let's remember about catching the occasion of prices, and a planned purchase can cost much less than we took into our established budget. Acquiring permanent, reliable suppliers may allow for obtaining discounts.

Taking everything into consideration, up the above arguments confirms that all these factors are essential aspects of gaining the professionalism of every beginner designer.

But before we achieve 'the' (niepotr) professional success, we should learn to choose the best team of qualified professionals with whom we will work. We need to learn (brak przedimka) relevant ethical, environmental and 'safety and health' (nie, mowimy 'health and safety) reasons, and learn how to plan and control (tu cos brak) budget and try to improve our way of working to make it faster and more effective. (wg mnie to zdanie jest za dlugie) First of all, choosing (brak przedimka) plumber, painter or producer of curtains and furniture should (tu brak 'be') baseD on their previous work, professionalism and a good portfolio. Before signing a legally binding contract, it is good to see their 'anterior' (zle slowo) jobs and assess whether we need precisely 'this' (wg mnie zle slowo..tutaj trzeba ...what they have produced).
Appropriately installed electrical and 'hydraulic' (cos mi to slowo nie pasuje, sprawdz) installations comply with health and safety regulations (tu brakuje slowa np 'and') are provided by competent licensed contractors.
We should remember about the appropriate training of employees and inform clients about possible risks before starting (wg mnie tutaj trzeba przedimka) work. If customers 'will live' (nie bo to nie jest to co masz na mysli, tutaj 'remain in the premises') during construction works, it is good to do this work in some parts of the house at the same time or when no one will stay in the house. Children should be warned about all dangers and 'let's' (nie, tutaj odzyuwasz sie do czytajacego, a wczesniej bylo bardzo oficjalnie) make sure they are not on the construction site. 'Otherwise' (nie, to jest zle slowo, tutaj potrzeba...another option is) you can offer clients to move out from the house to the end of the renovation.
What seems to be not very important, (tutaj trzeba napisac, however it is is that) when we decide to choose finishing, materials and furniture, we should pay attention to their composition because most of them may contain formaldehyde, heavy metals and volatile organic compounds.
'Important is' (zle, tutaj It is important ) to make contact with institutions and companies that can pick up from us, old furniture, books, newspapers, recycling. It is worth 'to learn' (zle slowo, tutaj learning) how to upholsteR and painT old furniture. This knowledge will help us in renewing the customer's furniture and thus save money that could BE 'spend' (zly czas, tutaj 'spent') on another worthless piece of furniture to our project.
In the bathrooms, we should make a detailed list of all (brak przedimka) units that will be needed and ask the plumber about the price of their assembly.
They also provide 'drawings' (nie, slowo jest 'drawing') plans and cost estimates related to the installation of a new kitchen. 'To' (nie, tutaj inaczej, As to ) the kitchen equipment elements, we must employ well-certified fitters. The installation or replacement of existing 'luminaires' (poszujkaj inne slowo) and accessories must always be carried out by a qualified electrician.
And lastly, to improve THE work, we should prepare a spreadsheet and a list 'of' (niepotr) all the different design elements that we can use for each subsequent job.
'Let's' (nie, znowu odzywasz sie jako kolega do czytajacego, tutaj It is important to) remember about catching 'the occasion of prices,' (nie, to jest za bardzo pop polsku, tutaj 'price reductions, price specials) and a planned purchase can cost much less than we took into our established budget.

Taking everything into consideration, 'up' (nie rozumiem uzycia tego slowa tutaj) the above arguments 'confirms' (nie, tutaj 'confirm) that all these factors are AN essential aspects of gaining the professionalism of every 'beginner designer' (wg mnie, tutaj 'design beginner).

Before signing a legally binding contract, it is good to see np vital, important

If customers 'will live' (nie bo to nie jest to co masz na mysli, tutaj 'remain in the premises') during construction works, it is good to do this work in some parts of the house at the same time or when no one will stay in the house. nawet z naniesieniem proponowanej poprawki, zdanie jest do kitu, imo ;))

electrical and hydraulic installations
electrical and plumbing should be installed by licensed professionals with compliance to state building codes and regulations

to the end of the renovation.
until the end.....

existing luminaires
lighting fixtures

'the occasion of prices
bargains and discounts

pay attention to their composition because most of them may contain formaldehyde, heavy metals and volatile organic compounds

check the ingredients in order to avoid buying toxic products