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PICTURE NUMBER ONE

The first picture shows a villa surround beautiful garden. The villa is attractive and elegant. On walls this villa is a beautiful ivy. I don't know where it is exactly, buy I only expect that it is in Poland. In garden I see nice green plants, for example: trees, bushes, grass. On the right I see father and daughter. They are holding a basket full of apples, so I expect that in garden is also fertile apple tree. Maybe in basket is tomatoes, I don't see it exactly. On the left, near rock I see a old man. He is sweeping. I expect that he is a cleaner or owner in this villa. Near the villa , under windows I see a two people. They are sitting on a chair and talking. They looks very friendly. Near a doors I see a woman. She is laying on the garden chair and she is sunbathing. In my opinion this place is quiet and pleasant, the garden is really relaxed. I want to live in this place.

Z GÓRY DZIĘKUJĘ.

1 zdanie: In the first picture I can see a villa surrounded by a beautiful garden
3 zdanie: proponuje napisać : There is a beautiful ivy on the walls on this villa.
4 zdanie: I don't know where it's situated but I suppose it's in Poland.
5 zdanie: In the garden there are some nice green plants...(dalej jest dobrze)
6 zdanie: On the right side of (nie wiem po prawej stronie czego jeżeli obrazka to (the picture) a jeżeli po prawej stronie willi to(the villa) I can see father and his daughter.
7 zdanie: ..so I suppose that there are also fertile apple trees there.
8 zdanie: Propably there are some tomatoes in the basket but it's hard to tell.
9 zdanie: On the left of (znów po lewej czego) near the rock I can see an old man.
10 zdanie: I suppose that he is ....(dalej dobrze)
11 zdanie: ... under the windows I can see two people.
13 zdanie: They look very friendly
14 zdanie: Next to the door there is a woman.
16 zdanie: The garden is very relaxing.
17 zdanie: I would like to live in a place like this.