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The well-paid job is being an actor. Firstly a person who want to be an actor must have appropriate skills for this job, diploma and practise. Also the actor should be proficient. Secendlly yhe skills are very important in this job. An actor have to express felling and know some languages.Despite of the actor plays very good they should dance and sing. Thirdlly the actor must be self - cofident and outing. Shouldn't worry about gossips and paparazzi. Thanks to the actor peoples can lough and have a fun. However they are rich, busy and famous, they help many foundation. Also they advertising healty way of life. To sum up I think they have many of skills and they earn suffice. they spent many hours on a plan cinemagraphic. The conditions of the job now are good because they know new people and sometimes have a fun.
'A' well-paid job is being an actor. Firstly a person who wantS to be
an actor must have THE appropriate skills for this job, 'A' diploma and
practise. Also AN actor should be proficient (in what?). SecONDLY, the skills
(of....)are very important in this job. An actor haS (3os lpoj)to express 'felling' (feelingS) and know 'some' languages (body language?).
Despite 'of the actor plays' (being very good at playing roles) they should ALSO BE ABLE TO dance and sing.
Thirdly the actor must be self - coNfident and 'outing' (OUTGOING).
Shouldn't (kto? co? nie piszesz - jak aktor to napisz) worry about gossip and THE paparazzi. Thanks to AN actor people can 'lough' (LAUGH) and have 'a' (bez 'a') fun. 'However' (lepsze slowo tutaj ALTHOUGH) 'they' (tzn kto? people czy actors?) are rich, busy and famous, they help many foundationS. 'Also they' (zla kolejnosc slow they also) advertisE A healtHy way of life. To sum up I think THAT they have many of skills and they earn 'suffice'(sufficient - lepiej, their earnings are sufficient). They spenD many hours on a 'plan cinemagraphic' (zla kolejnosc slow cinema.plan - albo on location). The conditions of the job 'now' (teraz ale do czego porownujesz?) are good because they GET TO know new people and sometimes THEY have 'a' (bez 'a' - dlaczego napisalas?) fun.
ACTING is A well-paid job. Firstly, a person who wantS to be an actor must have appropriate skills for this job, QUALIFICATIONS and practise. Also AN actor should be (proficient).- co masz na mysli?
Secendlly, the skills are very important in this job. An actor HAS to express fellingS and SPEAK FOREIGN languages. APART FROM playing very WELL, they should BE ABLE TO dance and sing. Thirdly, AN actor must be self - cofident and OUTGOING. THEY shouldn't worry about GOSSIP and THE paparazzi. Thanks to ACTORS, PEOPLE can LAUGH and have fun. ALTHOUGH they are rich, busy and famous, they help many CHARITIES. THEY ALSO advertisE A healty way of life.
To sum up, I think they have many skills and they earn A sufficIENT AMOUNT OF MONEY. They spent many hours AT THE FILM SET. The conditions of the job now are good because they CAN MEET new people and sometimes have fun.
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