prosze o sprawdzenie krotkiego listu

moj anglieski jest masakryczny xD no ale moze ktos mi to sprawdzi

Dear Kasia,
Many thanks for your letter. Anyway, you asked me about my special afternoon.
I leaving house at 3 a.m.
First I going to the center by bys,because i'm meeting there with my freunds.
After this we going to the ice rink and we are there 2 hours.
Then we going somthing eat and drink zu fastfood.
FInally we going to the cinema by Night Film marathon.
We buy popcorn and cole. THere was very funny and nice.
This afternoon i include for imitated.Im back home at 11 p.m
see y soon
Maxi

Pisząc o czynnościach wykonywanych na codzień, jak np.chodzenie do szkoły uzywa się Present Simple.

I 'leaving' (czas przeszly LEFT) THE house at '3 a.m' (3am to jest 3cia ranem- chyba nie).
First I 'going' (czas przeszly) to the centRE by 'bys' (BUS) ,because 'I'm' (ja jestem? chyba czas przeszly) meeting there with my 'freunds' FRIENDS.
After this we 'going' (czas prze) to the ice rink and we 'are' (czas przes) there 2 hours.
Then we 'going' (czas prze) somEthing TO eat and drink 'zu' IN A fastfood RESTAURANT.
FInally we 'going' (czas prze) to the cinema 'by' TO SEE THE Night Film marathon.
We buy popcorn and 'cole' (to jest po polsku) COKE. 'There' (nie, IT) was very funny and nice.
This afternoon I (duza litera na 'I') include for imitated (nie rozumiem tego zdania). I'm (nie czas przes) back home at 11 p.m
see 'y' (prosze w calosci, bo niewiem co/kto jest 'y')soon