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I put the knife down and called the police. Suddenly I understood that I did something horrible. I tried explain myself that I did good. Though this man tried me killed I can go to prison. I tried didn’t look at his body. How by fog I thought that I must hide a gun. Quickly I hide gun. I thought that I must escape from this place, but I couldn’t move. I don’t know good area. Moreover it was dark, scared night. For a moment or maybe it was a hour. I don’t know I heard loud voices. It was a police.Two policemen got off from a car and asked me. Do you take a police? Yes - I said. Do you know who did it? I have a one second for answer. NO. Ok so you can go out but I must take your address. I can’t belive that they don’t me to prison. I don’t see good picture. For a moment I lied in different place. I looked at watch it was three o’ clock at night. And I thought that it was just a dream.
I put the knife down and (tutaj mozesz dodac 'immediately')called the police.
I tried TO explain To myself that I did 'good' (nie lepiej 'something good').
Though this man tried 'me killed' (nie, TO kill me) I can go to prison.
I tried 'didn't' (nie, tutaj ..NOT to) look at his body. 'How by fog' (nie rozumiem tego, chyba masz na mysli, i tutaj zgaduje - As if in a fog,) I thought that I must hide THE gun. Quickly I 'hide' (tutaj potrzeba czasow. w czasie przeszlym, czas. niereg - HID) THE gun.
I 'don't' (lepiej didn't) know THE area very well. Moreover it was A dark, scarY
night. 'For a moment or maybe it was a hour' (gdzie jest druga czasc tego zdania?). I don't know WHEN I heard loud voices. It was THE police. Two policemen (mozna tez 'officers') got 'off' (nie, out of the) car and 'asked' (nie, questioned me).
Do you 'take' (nie, tutaj masz na mysli 'call the') police? Yes - I said. Do you know who did it? I 'have' (HAD, bo to czas przeszly) one second TO answer. NO. Ok, so you can go 'out' (out jest niepot) but I must take your
address. I can't belive that they 'don't me' (tutaj cos brakuje, moze 'send') (ale potrzeba didn't-czas przeszly) ME to prison.
'I don't see good picture' (nie rozumiem tego zdania).
For a moment I 'lied' (lied to cyganic, nie mowic prawdy - chyba masz na mysli LAY) in A different place. I looked at MY watch it was 'three o' clock at night' (to jest 3 a.m.). And I thought (mozna napisac 'what a good job') that THIS was just a dream.
Dziękuje:)

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