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In Kikity I spend three weeks of my holiday four years ago. It was on summer camp and I do not forget this village because it is bound this is a place where I never want to come back.

This middle of nowhere is in the north-east of Poland in the poorest voivodship of Poland. It is situated on the lakeside Luterskie. And there is nothing interesting, only this lake and forest. I do not mind if someone like wildlife but enough is as good as a feast.

In my summer camp there were no electronic equipment, no TV, no loud music. To make a phone call you had to go out of the building and run with your mobile phone all over the yard in order to find the place where the reach was. What is more, the nearest shop with normal, unhealthy food was located four kilometers away, and the prices were very high.

There were about hundred colonists divided into several groups. In my group there were fifteen girls. I was in a room with three other girls and I did not like them because they were smoking cigarettes and drinking beer all nigh long and in ours room always were parties. But the most annoying thing, was that they were touched and rummaged about in my stuff without asking permission. And there were only two showers with cold water for fifteen girls.

So I would not to come back to Kikity.


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In Kikity I spenT three weeks of my holiday four years ago. It was AT A
summer camp and I 'do not' (will not) forget this village because it is bound TO BE A place where I never want to come back TO.
It is situated on the 'lakeside Luterskie' (zmien kol. slow Lut. lakeside)
And there is nothing interesting THERE, only this lake and THE forest. I do not mind if someone likeS wildlife..
AT my summer camp there were..
..to find the place where the 'reach was' (signal could be reached). What is more, the nearest shop with normal, 'unhealthy' (czy masz na mysli 'unhealthy?)
...because they 'were smoking' (smoked) cigarettes and 'drinking' (drank) beer all nighT long and in ouR room 'always were parties' (there were always parties)
But the most annoying thing, was that 'they were touched' (chyba nie, tylko 'they touched' - they were touched-znaczy cos innego)and rummaged..
So I would 'not' (mozna tez 'never') 'to' (bez 'to') come back to Kikity.

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