będę wdzięczna jak ktos miły mi to sprawdzi

The ideal school is every student's dream. In that school students should feel relaxed and go there with pleasure. Also, the teachers who teach in the ideal school are nice and understanding. Classes are big enough for students and teachers. Students oughtn't to come to school sleepy. They have to be relaxed and in a good mood. Lessons start at 8.30 and end at 2 o'clock. In the begining there is some science, after that, they have practical lessons. On all desk is computer. Computers are connected to local area network and internet. It enable tracing information on many subjects. Even if student is absent he can listen to lesson by internet. In ideal school should be one big gymnastic hall, swimming pool, universal stadium for football, basketball and tennis. They train only the sport which they have chosen, so they don't have to train gymnastics if they chose for example tennis.The breaks last fifteen minutes and the lessons thirty minutes. The lessons aren’t borning, the teachers are openminded as their pupils. Every topic is clear because the teachers have explainded everything. The teachers are sociable, creative and patient. They always help students with their problems. There are about twenty students in a class. Half of these students are boys and girls. Students and teachers wear their favourite clothes in this school. Usually boys wear loose slacks and jumpers and grils wear miniskirts or jeans and low-cut T-shirts. The ideal school is safe but there aren’t any cameras installed because students should have the feeling of physical and mental comfort. Teachers are relaxed, sociable and nice. In the ideal school outdoors lessons are organised. It's connected with practical lessons, but these lessons are organised only when it is warm. Furthermore there are lots of trips to fascinating museums or great places. Also students can go to the cinema with the teacher, there are parties for special occasions for example: the end of the school year. In school of my dreams are three month summer holiday and two month winter ferries.

prosze was strasznie sprawdzcie mi to ten tekst. dlaczego nikt mi nie chce pomoc chociaz na to odpowiedzcie.

prosze daj nam chociaz 5 minut na przeczytanie tego.

martusia -
poprawilam to w twoim drugim watku - wystarczy jak napiszesz w jednym, ludzie poprawia. Jak jest ich mnostwo, to nikt niewie, ktore juz byly poprawiane.

dzięki ci terri takich ludzi tu trzeba a z drugiej strony zazdroszcze takiej wiedzy z angielskiego

a bo chyba znowu nie widac ale mozesz mi jeszcze arz zobaczy troche to skrociłam wiec zobacz tak terri jeszce raz na to. zazdroszce wiedzy z angielskiego.
The ideal school is every student's dream. In that school students should feel relaxed and go there with pleasure. Also, the teachers who teach in the ideal school are nice and understanding. Classes are big enough for students and teachers. Students shouldn’t come to school sleepy. They have to be relaxed and in a good mood. Lessons start at 8.30 and end at 2 o'clock. In the begining there is some science, after that, they have practical lessons. On all desks is computers. Computers are connected to local area network and internet. This enables the search for information on many subjects. Even if a student is absent he can listen to the lesson using the internet. In an ideal school there should be one big gymnastic hall, a swimming pool and a universal stadium for football, basketball and tennis. Students train only in the sport which they have chosen, so they don't have to train gymnastics if they chose for example tennis.The breaks last fifteen minutes and the lessons thirty minutes. The lessons aren’t borning, the teachers are openminded as their pupils. Every topic is clear because the teachers have explainded everything. The teachers are sociable, creative and patient. They always help students with their problems. There are about twenty students in a class. Half of these students are boys and girls. Students and teachers wear their favourite clothes in this school. Usually boys wear loose slacks and jumpers and grils wear miniskirts or jeans and low-cut T-shirts. The ideal school is safe but there aren’t any cameras installed because students should have the feeling of physical and mental comfort. Teachers are relaxed, sociable and nice. In the ideal school outdoors lessons are organised. They are connected with practical lessons, but these lessons are organised only when it is warm. Furthermore there are lots of trips to fascinating museums or great places. Also students can go to the cinema with the teacher, there are parties for special occasions for example: the end of the school year. In the school of my dreams there are three months summer holiday and two months holidays in winter.

On all desks 'is computers' (nie,'is' -3os.l.poj a computers - to l.mnoga) (albo On all desks there is a computer, albo On all desks are computers) .
..The lessons aren't 'borning' (BORING), the teachers are AS open minded as their pupils.
..teachers have explainED everything.
..jumpers and 'grils' (GIRLS) wear miniskirts or jeans and low-cut T-shirts.
In the ideal school outdOOR lessons are organised.