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Dubrovnik in Croatia is actually one of the most beautiful town in Europe, but just few years ago there was absolutely different. Because of the war which was in Balcan all Croatia include Dubrovnik was destroyed.
I had a chance to be in Dubrovnik after a year since the war had finished. What I saw was really horrible. In all town there was not a single bulding without holes and others signs of war. Even old part of this medieval town was damaged. Some part of this town looked like there were from a different planet. Burned houses without roofes and many bricks lieing on the street. But the worst thing was that you could easily found non-exploded bombs. The oldest part in Dubrovnik was in better condition. That looked quite good compared with others areas. Shops and even caffees were being opened. People was trying to pass a normal life.
Last summer I had got another oportunity to visit Dubrovnik. I just could not belevied how many changes Croatians did. Entire old part of Dubrovnik was rebuilt. The most beautiful was the medieval church with astonishing interior. Old part of town is a completely normal with many turist. Croatians leaved a couple of bulding without renovation. That is a sign of war and also another turistic atractions. Others part of Dubrovnik has also changed. There are many modern buldings and a great new stadium.
Dubrovnik is definietely one of the most beautiful places in Europe. If we compare that with state which was few years ago it is just unbelievable.

Dubrovnik in Croatia is actually one of the most beautiful townS in
Europe, but just few years ago, 'there' (lepiej dac 'it') was absolutely different. 'Because' (Ja nielubie zaczynac zdan z 'because' - to powinno sie uzywac do laczenia czesci tego samego zdania, chociaz widze, ze mnostwo ludzi juz uzywa to).Lepiej...This was due to.. the war which 'was' (was, nie daje tego wrazenia co to bylo...lepiej 'raged') in THE BalcanS WHEN all OF Croatia include Dubrovnik was destroyed.
I had a chance to be in Dubrovnik 'after a year' (nie, a year after-rok pozniej) 'since' (nie, AFTER) the war had 'finished' (nie, lepiej daj 'ended'). What I saw was really 'horrible' (moze lepsze slowo 'terible'). In all OF THE town there was not a single buIlding without holes and 'others' (other) signs of war. Even THE old part of this medieval town was damaged. Some partS of this town looked like there were from a different planet. Burned houses without 'roofes'(sprawdz l. mnoga) and many bricks 'lieing' on the street. But the worst thing was that you could easily 'found' (FIND-czas przeszly) 'non-exploded' (unexploded) bombs. The oldest part OF Dubrovnik was in A better condition. That looked 'quite good' (za kolok- lepiej ..less damaged) compared with 'others' (other) areas. Shops and even 'caffees' (cafes) were being opened. People 'was' (was to l. poj - a people-to l. mnoga...tutaj people WERE) trying to 'pass a' (return to A) normal life.
Last summer I had got another opPortunity to visit Dubrovnik. I just
could not 'belevied' (sprawdz, ale podam BELIEVE) how many changes Croatians 'did' (had managed to do). THE entire old part of Dubrovnik was rebuilt. THE old part of town is 'a' (niepotrz 'a') completely normal with
many 'turist' (sprawdz w slowniku). Croatians 'leaved' (nie, to czas niereg - they LEFT) a couple of buldingS without renovation.
That is a 'sign' (lepiej a reminder) of THE war and also another 'turistic' (sprawdz, jak to slowo sie pisze) aTtractions. 'Others' (Nie, OTHER) partS of Dubrovnik haVE also changed. There are many modern buldings and
a great new (football?)stadium.
Dubrovnik is 'definietely' (ortog) one of the most beautiful places in Europe.
If we compare 'that' (to znaczy dzisiejszy stan-ale tego nie napisales) with THE state IN which IT was A few years ago, it is just unbelievable.

zauwaz to zdanie:
I had a chance to be in Dubrovnik a year after the war had ended.

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