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If you like reading moving books I can recommend one to you! “Oscar and Mrs Rose” by Eric Emmanuel Schmitt would be a great choice. This amazing story tells about a sick seven-year-old boy who does not want to give up and he is fighting for the illness. His best friend is a nurse - Mrs Rose, who helps him to defeat his sickness.
More events take place in the hospital. Oscar makes friends with other sick children and the personnel. Mrs Rose knows that Oscar is dying and she wants to make his latest days much nicer. She ordered him to count each day as a year so Oscar is getting older very fast. Due to this fact Oscar fell in love with Peggy Blue and they are planning to establish a family. But one day his girlfriend recovered and they had to split up with each other. That moment Oscar didn’t freak out. It passed many days so he was old then. Being aware that his end is coming Oscar was happy that he could spend all his life. A few days later Oscar passed away.
I can recommend this book to everybody! If you read this novel you will appreciate your life with all good and bad sides which it is connected to. Reading the book everyone can shed a few tears but it is not a reason to shame.

Z góry bardzo dziękuję!!!

pomoże ktoś?? będe bardzo wdzięczny!! mam tak kilka takich zwrotów których nie jestem pewny. np. zakładac rodzinę. dałem establish ale to chyba nie pasuje. set up tez odpada bo to raczej jest w sensie zakładania firmy. i generalnie czy jest OK. chce poternowac bo w poniedziałek matura i strasznie się boje. chciałbym pisac opowiadanie ale jak nie bedzie to co zrobię?? ćwicze te inne formy. jak ktos ma chwilke to proszę sprawdzić!! wielkie dzięki!! pozdrawiam

...to you. '!' ten znak jest niepotrz.
This amazing story tells 'about' OF a sick seven-year-old boy.. he is fighting 'for the' AN illness.
Oscar makes friends with other sick children (mozna tez 'as well as') the personnel.
...she wants to make his 'latest' LAST days much nicer. She orderS
him to count each day as a year so Oscar is getting older very 'fast' (quickly).
Due to this fact Oscar fALLS in love with Peggy Blue and they are
planning to 'establish' (moze lepiej 'raise') a family. But one day his girlfriend recoverES and they 'had' (HAVE) to 'split up' (mozna tez 'separate' from) with each other. AT that moment Oscar 'didn't' (DOESN'T) freak out.
'It passed many days' (szyk, zla kol. slow Many days have passed) so he was old then.
Being aware that his end is coming Oscar was happy that he could spend all his life (tu cos brakuje).
I can recommend this book to everybody'!' (tez znak nic nie dodaje, to tak jakbys krzyczal na kogos, a tutaj trzeba kogos mile zachecac)
If you read this novel you will appreciate your life MORE, with all ITS good and bad 'sides' (points, facets). (which 'it is connected to'-jabym tego nie pisala). Reading the book everyone can shed a few tears but it is 'not a reason to shame' (nothing to be ashamed of).

Dziękuję!!