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We often ask ourselves if our lifestyle is healthy. It seems that the most important things to be in good condition are a good diet. Although fast food isn’t healthy have a some advantages.
Firstly eating this type eat is very comfortable. People which long and hard works don’t have time on do healthy food., so goes to bar with fast food. Also that’s no problem order on hause because is the most straighty method.
Next fast food is for majority people very taste and nourishing eatables. Evrytginf teenagers use with type food.. Ice crims fried potatoes and hamburger it dainty(smakołyk??) which can’t withstand.
Unfortunately fast food bad influance on our silhouette. People eating too ofen grow fat.
Secondly eating fast food is very disadventageus for our helth. The meal don’t costain not any vitamins and minerals while we need their, wherease have a disadventageus animal fat which bad influence on our organism and may cause different disease.
Lastly disadventages is it that people become lazy and not want them nothing even brekfast.
In conclusion I think takt is more disadventages than adventages eeating fast food. Think that people should eat healthy food because for strong bones and healthy teeth.
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It seems that the most important things IN ORDER to be in good condition are a good diet (i co jeszcze...bo masz things, a to l. mnoga).
Although fast food isn't healthy 'have' (nie, IT HAS) 'a' (bez 'a') some advantages.
Firstly eating this type 'eat' (zle slowo-inne) is very comfortable. People which WORK long and hard 'works' (w zlym miejscu) don't have time 'on do' (nie rozumiem tego) healthy food, so 'goes' (on?ona? - lepiej THEY GO) to 'bar
with fast food' (fast food bar). Also 'that's no problem' (znaczy 'that-co?) AS THE order on 'hause' (ortog) because IT is the most 'straighty' (sprawdz ortog) method.
Next fast food is for THE majority OF people very tastY and nourishing
'eatables' (to slowo nie istnieje w jez. ang.- cos innego). 'Evrytginf' (ortog) teenagers use with type food (napisz to zdanie jeszcze raz -niema sensu) . Ice 'crims' (ortog) fried potatoes and hamburger it 'dainty' (zle slowo-) which can't 'withstand' (zle slowo).
Unfortunately fast food HAS A bad 'influance' (ortog) on our silhouette. People
WHO eat too 'ofen' (ortog) grow fat.
Secondly eating fast food is very 'disadventageus' (ortog) for our 'helth' (ortog). The meal 'don't' (DOESN'T) 'costain' (ortog) any vitamins and minerals 'while we need their' (nie, while we need THEM), 'wherease' (ortog) have a 'disadventageus' (ortog) animal fat which HAS A bad influence on our
organism and may cause different diseaseS.
Lastly 'disadventages' (ortog) is 'it' (nie rozumiem tego 'it' tutaj) that people become lazy and not want 'them' (nie rozumiem, tutaj brakuje pare wyrazow) nothing even brekfast.
In conclusion I think 'takt' (ortog) THERE is more 'disadventages' (ortog) than 'adventages' (ortog) IN eating fast food. 'I' think that people should eat healthy food 'because' (niepotr) for strong bones and healthy teeth.

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