Bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie mojej pracy domowej pod względem gramatycznym :D
Dear Sir,
I am writing about the article 'Liam's story', which I read in your magazine last week and I thought that I have express my opinion on this theme.
I think Liam's mother should have let Liam go witch his friend. He is older than Shona and he wanted to do different things with different people. Shona shouldn't have made a big fuss about it. She should have understood Liam.
The accident, which happend on Shona's way to the gym club is only her fault. She shouldn't have crossed the road without looking.
Luckily everything is all right and Shona make a good recovery.
Regards, Ania
Z góry dziękuje ;)