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My last holiday.
I want to tell you about my last holiday. In July I was on summer camp in Ustka. Ustka is a small tourist town locate near to Baltic. In the season in this town is about 30,000 people, but in out of season Ustka counts 16,000 inhabitants. That town is very beautiful, the beach is very clean. There are a lot of life guards. On the sidewalk was many street shops, where we can buy souvenirs. We started our trip early. After long coach journey with 45 children by age 8 to 10 we reach to Ustka. For two weeks we was accommodate in Bursa Młodzieżowa. We have a sun by 3 days. Rest of our holiday was raining, but residence with those kids in the same hotel was very interested experience. We try to visit most of interesting places. We were in antique church, Ustka shipyard and port, Museum of Bread, Łeba and the Słowiński National Park. I try to sunbath, but the rain isn’t sunbath very well. I was eating a lot of ice crams, then I was sick. All in all this holiday was incredible and I will remember it for rest of my life.
In July I was 'on' AT A summer camp in Ustka. Ustka is a small tourist town locateD near 'to' THE Baltic. 'In' DURING the season in this town THERE is about 30,000 people, but 'in' (niepotr) out of season Ustka counts ONLY 16,000 inhabitants.
On the sidewalk 'was' ARE (dlatego, ze wymieniasz l. mnoga shops) many street shops, where we can buy souvenirs.
After A long coach journey with 45 children RANGING FROM 'by age' (niepotr) 8 to 10 we reachED 'to' (niepotr) Ustka. For two weeks 'we was' (prosze zauwazyc, ze we-to l. mnoga tutaj jest potrzebny czas WERE) accommodateD in Bursa Młodzieżowa. We 'have a' HAD sun 'by' FOR 3 days. FOR THE rest of our holiday IT was raining, but 'residence' (lepiej uzyj slowo 'staying') with those kids in the same hotel was A very interestING experience. We trIED to visit most of THE interesting places. We 'were' (tutaj lepiej 'visited') 'in' AN antique church, Ustka's shipyard and port...
I trIED to sunbathE, but the rain 'isn't' (tutaj napisz prevented any sunbathing) 'sunbath very well' (niepotr). I was eating a lot of ice crEams, then I was sick. All in all this holiday was incredible and I will remember it for THE rest of my life.
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