może ktos pomoże??;-)

hej. proszę o pomoc w poprawie błędów. z góry dzięki!

Computers are common and important in several spheres of our life. For example in an? economy, the medicine, the education etc. Thanks to them doctors can better help to ill people in hospitals. they can monitor the most of parameters practical(parametry życiowe?) of patients. Computers are very helpful to doctors and nurses. In the banking computers are irreplaceable. I doubt that without the computer the bank will act efficiently and quickly. This is surely impossible. Without computers would prevail(panowałby) chaos in the bank. Computers fulfill the very important role in the education, because computers make acquire of the additional knowledge easier thanks to the Internet.

For example in 'an?' THE economy, 'the' (bez the) medicine, 'the' (bez the) education 'etc' (nie, lepiej nie pisac etc - albo wymien inne spheres).
Thanks to 'them' (tutaj uzyj 'computers') doctors can better help 'to' (niepotr) ill people in hospitals. They can monitor 'the most of parameters' (most of the practical parameters-tutaj nie jestem pewna) of THEIR patients. In the banking (albo 'banking industries' albo 'In banking')computers are irreplaceable. I doubt 'that' (whether) without the computerS the bank 'will' (would) act efficiently and quickly. This (surely)'is' (would be)impossible.
Without computers (chaos) would prevail in the bank.
Computers fulfill the very important role in 'the' (bez the) education, because
computers make THE acquiSITION of 'the' (bez the) additional knowledge easier thanks to the Internet.