proszę o sprawdzonko;-)

hej! proszę o sprawdzenie już ostatniego tekstu o komputerach w moim wydaniu:P

In my opinion the advantages of the computerization are huge. Thanks to computers people have a possibility get to know of the world(poznawania świata). The computer is connected with the Internet which gives many possibilities. Thanks to the Internet we can broaden our own knowledge, we have a possibility of meet(bardziej chciałam ‘poznania’ ale nic mi tu nie pasowao :( )of new, interesting people from all over the world. Computers make easier many matters. Computers are irreplaceable in economy. Difficult mathematical calculations can be enumerated into several moments. Thanks to computers people can do business easier . I think also that computers are very useful in the science. I don’t know for what concretely scientist use computers however I heard that computers are very necessary them. Computers are present in our life and become more and more common and indispensable in everyday life.

In my opinion the advantages of 'the' (bez 'the') computerization are huge. Thanks to computers people have 'a' (lepiej THE) possibility TO get to know 'of' (niepotr) the world.
The computer is connected with the Internet which gives many possibilities - ((to zdanie cos mi nie gra.))
'Thanks' (moze inne slowo - mozna tez With the possibility of Internet)to the Internet we can broaden our own knowledge, we have 'a' THE possibility of meeTING new, interesting people from all over the world. Computers make (ale co? LIFE) easier IN many 'matters' (lepiej uzyj 'areas').
...calculations can be enumerated 'into' IN several moments.
'Thanks' (uzylabym cos innego, bo caly czas 'thanks to' - moze Also) computers MEAN THAT people can do business easier. I 'think also' (also think) that computers are very useful in 'the' (bez 'the') science. I don't know (tutaj 'exactly') for what 'concretely' (niepotr) scientistS use computers,
however I'VE heard that computers are very necessary TO them. Computers are
present in our life and HAVE become more and more common and indispensable
in everyday life.

dziekuje. nie wiem tylko dlaczego 'Computers are present in our life and HAVE become more and more common and indispensable in everyday life.' jest have w tym zdaniu...