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Every year karaoke school festival is in early October before
start of the second term. Karaoke is biggest school event.
It is held on Monday , Tuesday and Wednesday. It take place
in school hall. In organize this meeting ingeniousness produce
evidence principally students, but the teachers stand by this
idea. I don;t like singing but all in all i can say that in my
opinion it is wheeze.
On first day of happening we can hear music of inviteing star.
This year was Jon Bon Jovi famous rock artiste. The most rousing
applause take his newest song Lost Highway. After the glorious
concert gathering in hall people , can snacking something to eat
and take relax before theit Tuesday's presentation. 109


Like i say earlier on Tuesday's students music talents or layman
can sing one select by themselves songs before friends ,
the bidden guests and jury. After all students presentation stage
appertain to the teachers. Professorial music flaunt were not on worse
level. I think that the best was English teacher. She sing and play
on guitar and it makes extraordinary effect.
When all bands were already appear, we can talk with the popular music
connoisseur who was chairman of jury. Tomasz Sadowy none the less that
he is popular and famous person find for us much time.
We ask him about many things and he ansewer us with calm.
Afrer rewiew the second day of karaoke festival was end.
Day later marks committee inform us about who win. It was big treat
because the winer was my class-friend Julia.
In my point of view that kind of show is corker.We can
learn and have fun together.On next year i will started too.
Every year the karaoke school festival is in early October before
>the second term arrives. Karaoke is the biggest school event.
> It is held on Monday , Tuesday and Wednesday. It takes place
>in the school hall. Those who are involved principally in praparing it are the students themselves, but the teachers can be counted on,too.
I don't like singing but, all in all, I can say that in my
> opinion it is wheeze.
>On the first day of the happening, we can hear some pieces of music of the invited star.
>This year it was Jon Bon Jovi in person-the famous rock performer. The most rousing
> applause had taken his newest song entitled "Lost Highway". After the glorious
> concert,people gathered in the hall could have a lovely snack
> and relax before their Tuesday's presentation. 109
>
>...............................................tutaj poprawiłem tylko pare błędów,bo sam nie wiem co chcesz nawet napisać.
>As I say, earlier on the Tuesday's students music talents or layman
>can sing one select by themselves songs before friends ,
> the bidden guests and jury. After all students presentation stage
>appertain to the teachers. Professorial music flaunt were not on worse
>
>level. I think that the best was English teacher. She sings and plays
guitar and it makes an extraordinary effect.
>When all bands had already appeared, we could talk with the popular
>music
>connoisseur who was the jury- Tomasz Sadowy, nonetheess that
>
>he is popular and famous person find for us much time.
>We ask him about many things and he ansewer us with calm.
>Afrer rewiew the second day of karaoke festival was end.
>Day later marks committee inform us about who win. It was big treat
>because the winer was my class-friend Julia.
> In my point of view that kind of show is corker.We can
>learn and have fun together.On next year i will started too.
Those who are involved principally in praparing it are the students themselves, but the teachers can be counted on,too.

w zdaniu In organize this meeting ingeniousness produce
evidence principally students, but the teachers stand by this
idea.

chcialam powiedziec ze pomysł z zorganizowaniem tegogo spotkania nalezal do uczniów ale nauczyciele przystali na ten pomysł.
..She sings and plays THE guitar and it makes an extraordinary effect.
When all bands had already appeared, we could talk with the popular
music connoisseur who was the 'jury' JUDGE- Tomasz Sadowy, 'nonetheess' (ortog)
that he is popular and famous person 'find for us much time' (zla kol slow - Powinno byc...Sadowy and even the fact that he is famous and popular did not prevent him from finding some time for us).
We askED (czas przeszly -ed) him about many things and he 'ansewer' (answerED-czas przeszly -ed) us 'with calm' (calmly).
'Afrer' (after) THE rewiew the second day of karaoke festival was endED.
Day later THE markING committee informED us about 'who win' THE WINNER . It was A big treat because the wiNner was my class-friend Julia.
In my point of view that kind of show is A corker.
'ON' (niepotrz Next year 'i'(I wielka litera- ale chyba masz na mysli 'it) will 'started' START (bo next year to nie jest czas przeszly) too.

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