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Po niektórych zdaniach po angielsku napisałem je po polsku jeśli coś nie byłoby jasne! Dlatego tekstu jest więcej ! Bardzo mi zależy ! Pięknie proszę...

Recently the increasing popularization of shopping in supermarkets is noted. (Ostatnio odnotowywana / zauważana jest rosnąca popularyzacja zakupów w supermarketach.) It has the adventages and disadventages. (Ma to swoje zalety i wady.)
First of all, one of the good side od shopping in supermarkets is a big variety of goods. A choise is unusually great and we have a big probability that we would buy exactly that we want to. (Wybór jest niezwykle duży i mamy spore prawdopodobieństwo że kupimy dokładnie to czego chcemy.) Products are grouped and that additionally a choise makes easier. (Produkty są pogrupowane co dodatkowo ułatwia wybór.)
Secondly, the every product we can touch and closely look at it. (Po drugie każdy produkt możemy dostnąć i oglądnąć.) Before a purchase we can make up our mind and see if the product is really good. (Przed kupnem możemy się zastanowić i zobaczyć czy produkt jest rzeczywiście dobry.) We can chack a expiry date out too. (Ciągle to CAN i CAN.. można jakoś inaczej? zastąpić ? expiry date – chodzi o datę ważności). Thirdly, in supermarkets are reduced prices usually and a lot of assorted promotions. (Po trzecie, w supermarketach są zwykle obniżone ceny i duzo różnych promocji.)
We are able to buy the same products as in the local, corner shop but we pay less more probably. (Możemy kupić te same produkty co w lokalnym sklepie ale najprawdopodobniej zapłacimy mniej.) That are only some adventagos of shopping in supermarkets. Unfortunately, it has a bed side too. (Niestety ma to też swoją złą stronę.) There is a fiev of disadwentages: (Oto niektóre z wad.):
Firstly, in supermarkets are products of not high quality sometimes. It’s often connected with low prices. A price couldn’t be abnormally decreades. We can doubly puy for a ‘extreme promotion’ throwing a bed purchase away and buying a new one if the first haven’t proven.. (Możemy podwójnie zapłacić za “wyjątkową promocję” wyrzucając zły zakup i kupując nowy jeśli pierwszy się nie sprawdzi.) Furthermore shopping in supermarkets are time-consuming. A great shop are often localised outside town. We have to get there. We waste our time for access. (Marnujemy nasz czas na dojazd.)
We misspend the money for a petrol or tickets too. Additionally, we waste the time standing in a long queues.
Last but not least, in supermarkets we are not alone and we could be robbed. We must to mind our hand bags and wallets. Our car can be stolen by car thieves too.

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Recently the increasing popularization of shopping in supermarkets HAS BEEN
noted. 'It' (ale co?) has 'the' (Niepotr) advAntages and disadvAntages.
First of all, one of the good sideS od shopping in supermarkets is 'a' THE
big variety of goods. A 'choise' (ortog) is unusually great and 'we have' (mozna tez ..there is) a big probability that we would buy exactly that we want to. Products are grouped TOGETHER and that additionally THAT MAKES THE 'choise' (ortog) 'makes' MUCH easier.
Secondly, 'the every product' (to trzeba na koncu) we can touch and closely look at 'it' EVERY PRODUCT. Before a purchase we can make up our mindS (dlatego, ze 'we' to l. mnoga) and see if the product is really good. 'We can' (It is possible to check....) chEck 'a' THE expiry date out too.
Thirdly, in supermarkets THERE are USUALLY reduced prices 'usually' (niepotr) and a lot of assorted promotions.
ALTHOUGH we are able to buy the same products as in the local, corner shop but
IT IS LIKELY THAT we pay less. 'more probably' (niepotr) ThESE are
only some 'adventagos' (ORTOG) of shopping in supermarkets. Unfortunately, it
has a 'bed' (bed - to lozko?? tutaj BAD) side too. 'There is a' HERE ARE FEW
'fiev' (ortog) of THE 'disadwentages' (ORTOG).
Firstly, in supermarkets THERE are products of 'not high' (mozna questionable albo not too high a) quality sometimes.
'It's' THIS IS often connected with low prices.
A price couldn't be abnormally decreades. - tego zdania nie rozumiem, nie wiem, co chesz powiedziec.....
We can ('doubly' (ortog) 'puy' (ortog)) (zla kol slow PAY DOUBLE) for aN 'extreme promotion' throwing a 'bed' (znowu to lozko?) purchase away and buying a new one if the first 'haven't' HASN'T BEEN proven..
Furthermore shopping in supermarkets 'are' IS time-consuming. A 'great shop' (co masz tu na mysli???) are often 'localised' LOCATED outside THE town. We have to get there (NO? ale jak - czy by car?) We waste A LOT OF our time ON
'access' FOR THE JOURNEY. (access znaczy cos innego, zle slowo tutak) .
We 'misspend' WASTE the money for 'a' (niepotr) petrol or tickets too (tickets do teatru, kina, tramwaju?)
Additionally, we waste the time standing in 'a' (Bez a) long queues.
We must 'to' (niepotr) mind our handbags (jedno slowo) and wallets.

wow terri nie wiem jak mam dziękować.. jest dość późno.. powoli traciłem nadzieje że ktoś odpowie.. baaardzo baardzo dziękuję !