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I am (imię i Nazwiosko) I dont have a middle name. Im sixteen. I was born in 03.08.1991 in Warsaw. I live in Warsaw. I have ona older sister- Ewa. Sha has 18years old. My family is big..I have a lot of uncles, aunts end cousins. I play volleball. My father don't work and my mother worki in SANEPID. My sister is school girl and she learn in this school. I like reading books, dancing and of course playing volleyball. My average weeklyday looks like as follows: I get up at 7o'clock I go to school after the school I learn and from times to times I go out witch my friends. Usually in tje saturday I meet with my friends or I go to the party. In saturday I go to church with my family and then I do my homework and I learn.

I'm a tall girl. I am 170 tall. I weight 63 pounds. Im of average build. I have big blue eyes. I have brown heir they are long and straight. My complexion is dark. I have an oval face and I have a lof of freekles on my nose. I have a pearl white teeth and full-lipped mouth.


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I was
>born in 03.08.1991 in Warsaw.

I was born ON

>Sha has 18years old.

She IS

.I have a lot of
>uncles, aunts end cousins.

I have MANY .....AND

My father don't work and
>my mother worki in SANEPID.

My father DOESN'T....WORKS for Sanepid


My sister is school girl and she learn in
>this school.

My sister is a student/pupil in this school. (w której szkole? this sugeruje, ze juz pisalas o tej szkole, a nie pisalas)

>My average weeklyday looks like as follows:
weekday looks like this:


I get up at
>7o'clock I go to school after the school I learn and from times to
>times I go out witch my friends

kropka po school. Nowe zdanie od After school....from time to time

Usually in tje saturday

On Saturday, I usually...

In saturday I go to church with my
>family and then I do my homework and I learn.

On Sunday

>I'm a tall girl. I am 170 tall

170 czego?

I am 170 cm tall.


>I weight 63 pounds

juz bys dawno umarla z niedozywienia

I weigh 63 kg.

I have brown heir they are long and
>straight

I have brown HAIR. IT is long and straight.

freckles

pearly white
dziękuję :) !!

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