sprawdzie mi to:* z góry wielkie thx:*:*

Siemka wszystim:*:)
Mam wielką prośbę. Sprawdzcie mi to, bo nie wiem czy to jest dobrze ;/ A jakby cos to mozecie cos dodać żeby to lepiej brzmiało:D z góry wielkie thx:*:*:*

Firstly, I think that Dj’s work is very interesting and fascinating. They can marvel many night life attraction. What’s more DJs are surprisingly well paid. However work of dj have also disadvantages. They sometimes have to working long hours. Furthermore their work happen main at the night so they are often exhausting. Finally, their work is very dangerous, because they are connect with nightlife. Moreover lights cause discomfort to the eyes. On the one hand dj’s work can bring a lot of funny and satisfaction but on the other hand it can be very tiring. In addition, Djs have a lot of expenses : equipment, new CDs or vinyl records and transport. To sup up, see, that dj’s work brings many benefit and also disadvantages. In my opinion, dj’s work is very difficult and demands a suitable experience. I think that it isn’t job for everyone.

no to czekam:* bu$$$ka:):P

Firstly, I think that 'Dj's work' (lepiej napisac...the work of a DJ) is very interesting and fascinating.
'They can marvel many night life attraction' (CO? napisz to zdanie po polsku - nie rozumiem)
However, THE work of 'dj' (dlaczego malymi?) 'have' (WORK to jest 'it' -3os.l.poj - dlaczego uzywasz 'have'?) also disadvantages. (ale wczesniej nie pisales, ze ma jakies advantages, nie mozesz uzywac slowa 'also', jak nie mamy to z czym polaczzyc).
They sometimes have to 'working' WORK long hours. Furthermore their work
happenS 'main' (nie, slowo jest MAINLY, 'main' to glownY, a tutaj chciales napisac glownIE) at 'the' (niepotr) night, so they are often 'exhausting' (tutaj potrzeba czasownika simple past).
Finally, their work is very dangerous, because they are 'connect' CONNECTED with nightlife. (i co do tego?- w jaki sposob to jest 'dangerous' - mam sie domyslac?)
Moreover lights CAN (bo nie jestes pewny) cause discomfort to the eyes. On the one hand dj's work can bring a lot of 'funny' (funny ale co? czego? - mysle, ze nawet nie chciales tego przekazac, slowo jest FUN) and satisfaction, (przecinek przed BUT) but on the other hand it can be very tiring.
To 'sup' ('sup up' - znaczy 'wypij to szybko' - mysle, ze to tylko literowka)up, 'see' (a gdzie ma sie patrzec, co mam ogladac?, cos zapomniales), that dj's work brings many benefit and also disadvantages. In my opinion, dj's work is very difficult and demands 'a' (niepotr) suitable experience. I think that it isn't 'A' job for everyone.

no to tak ma być :

Firstly, I think that the work of a DJ is very interesting and fascinating.
Oni mogą podziwiać (albo brać udział) wiele nocnych atrakcji. However, the work of DJ has disadvantages. They sometimes have to working long hours. Furthermore their work happens mainly at 'the' (niepotr ????) night, so they are often
exhaust Finally, their work is very dangerous, because they are connect
connected with nightlife (niewiem co tu może byc;/) Moreover lights can cause discomfort to the eyes. On the one hand work of the DJ can bring a lot of fun (DJs can take a part in party etc.) and satisfaction, but on the other hand it
can be very tiring. To sum up (literówka ;D), see that dj's work brings many benefits (czyli "podsumowując widać, że praca Dj przynosi wiele korzyści)and also disadvantages. In my opinion, dj's work is very difficult and demands
suitable experience. I think that it isn't a job for everyone.

i jak teraz? :D
P.S jestem dziewczyną :P

They can marvel AT many nightlife attractionS -Oni mogą podziwiać wiele nocnych atrakcji
>>>They sometimes have to working...
They sometimes have to 'working' WORK long hours. Ja to juz poprawilam, na 'work' czy nie zauwazylas?
>>Furthermore their work happens mainly at 'the' (niepotrzebne - znaczy ze 'the'tam nie powinno byc)
>>>night, so they are often 'exhaust' (exhaust to jest 'rura wydechowa w samochodzie' - dlaczego to piszesz, jak juz napisalam ..... they are often 'exhausting' (tutaj potrzeba czasownika simple past-od kiedy exhaust jest czas. simple past?).
Finally, their work is very dangerous, because they are CONNECTED with nightlife. (Napisz dlaczego tak myslisz)
>>>To sum up see that dj's work
'see' (a gdzie mam sie patrzec, co mam ogladac?, cos zapomniales, kto to ma widziec, czy juz widzial?)