Christmas Time - proszę o sprawdzenie

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Write about Christmas – time in Poland. How do Poles prepare for Jezus coming, how do they organize their life in Christmas time, how do usually and tradicionally Christmas look like in Poland … . Is Christmas time important for you? Why yes / or not. Give the reasons.

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Christmas time is a specific period* when all people are so good and pleasant*. The time borning of Jezus was named in Poland “Wigilia”. “Wigilia” is a very good prepared and ceremonial* supper in Polish homes. Polish Christmas time has a very old tradition with a lot of customs, for example sharing a Holy Wafer, twenty dishes, an empty place of unknown guest, after “Wigilia at twelve p.m. o’clock people go to churches for ceremony of “Pasterka”. Today are a lot of other customs so. Theoretically* people will prepare for Jezus coming in silence and reflection* but in real situation is opposite! People in stress and hurry go on shoppings for food and presents. Shops take a lot of promotions a month before Christmas, banks encourage* to borrow a money with “good” percent, in these situations a lot of people forget about a Christmas real tradition. Nowadays bad fact is if the most important in Christams are presents. I’m young people, without job and I don’t have a lot of money for presents and I take a very cheaped and simbolized presents for members of my family and I don’t expect for a lot of present for me, in my opinion the atmosphere of Christmas is sufficient* for me. In Christmas time a the best custom for me is eating special and traditional dishes. Before Christmas I meet with friends and we wish a lot of hapinnes, love, good health and money. I like Christmas time because in these period I have a rest* with my family.

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Christmas time is a specific period when all THE people are so good and
pleasant (a niby dlaczego?).
The 'time borning' (to nawet nie istnieje w jez. ang. of JeSus 'was' IS (chyba do dzisiaj i do konca swiata bedzie tak sie nazywalo) named in Poland
“Wigilia".
“Wigilia" is a 'very good' (bardzo dobrze?) prepared and ceremonial supper in Polish homes.
Polish Christmas time has a very old tradition with a lot of customs, for example sharing a Holy Wafer, twenty dishes, an empty place FOR AN unknown guest. After “Wigilia at 'twelve p.m. o'clock' (o tym juz pisalam, to pojecie nie istnieje - pisze sie MIDNIGHT) people go to churches for THE ceremony of
>“Pasterka".
Today THERE are a lot of other customs 'so' (zle slowo - czy miales na myslis 'too'?). Theoretically, people will prepare for JeSus coming in silence and reflection but in 'real situation' (to znaczy inne situations sa 'unreal'? - uzyj real life) IT is opposite!
People ARE in GREAT stress and hurry TO go 'on' (niepotr) 'shoppings'(nie, tutaj shopping) for food and presents.
Shops 'take' (chyba make albo do) a lot of promotions a month before
Christmas, banks encourage (kogo?) to borrow 'a' (niepotr) money with “good"(uzyj small albo minimal) percent (of interest). In these situations a lot of people forget about 'a' (niepotr) 'Christmas real tradition' (zla kol slow...the real traditional m,eaning of Xmas).
Nowadays A bad fact is THAT 'if' (niepotr) the most important THINGS 'in' AT Christams TIME are THE presents.
'I'm young' (CO TO?) popraw) people, without A job and I don't have a lot of money for presents and SO I take a very 'cheaped' CHEAP and 'simbolized' SYMBOLIC presents for members of my family and I don't expect 'for' (niepotr) a lot of present for me. In my opinion the atmosphere of Christmas is
sufficient for me.
'In' AT Christmas time 'a' (ej, i 'a' i 'the' - czy to nazywa sie opcje?) niepotr) the best custom for me is eating special and traditional dishes. Before Christmas I meet with MY friends and we wish EACH OTHER a lot of 'hapinnes' (ortog), love, good health and money. I like Christmas time because 'in' DURING thIS period I have a rest with my family.
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Christmas time is a specific period when all the people are so good and pleasant. The Jezus coming is named in Poland “Wigilia”. “Wigilia” is a ceremonial supper in Polish homes. Polish Christmas time has a very old tradition with a lot of customs, for example sharing a Holy Wafer, twenty dishes, an empty place for an unknown guest, after “Wigilia” at midnight people go to churches for ceremony of “Pasterka”. Today there are a lot of other customs too. Theoretically people will prepare for Jezus coming in silence and reflection but in real life it is opposite! People are in a great stress and hurry to go shopping for food and presents. Shops make a lot of promotions a month before Christmas, banks encourage us to borrow money with minimal percent, in these situations a lot of people forget about the real traditional meaning of Christmas. Nowadays a bad fact is that the most important things at Christmas time are the presents. I’m young person, without a job and I don’t have a lot of money for presents and so I take a very cheap and symbolic presents for members of my family and I don’t expect a lot of presents for me, in my opinion the atmosphere of Christmas is sufficient for me. At Christmas time the best custom for me is eating special and traditional dishes. Before Christmas I meet with my friends and we wish each other a lot of happinnes, love, good health and money. I like Christmas time because during this period I have a rest with my family.
jeszcze zauwazylam te:
JeSus - Jesus z 's'
(zacznij tu nowe zdanie) After “Wigilia" at midnight people go to churches
for THE ceremony of “Pasterka".
Theoretically people will prepare for JeSus' coming..
I'm 'A' young person, without a job....
wielkie dzięki za pomoc.
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