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Dear Agnes,
Thank you for your last letter.It was great to hear from you.Don't be angry that I haven't written for so long, because I have many work to school.

I've just finished first clase, and now I'm thinking about a holidays. I would like leave for the England.So I looking for job in the Internet and I found a fantastic job for me.

I'm writing to ask you if I could came visit you for some time.I planing leave at the beginning of July. I would like stay with you several days as long as I haven't found a flat for me. I hope thats you let me know if it's ok with you.

I want you to visit me at the end of the holidays.

Give my regards to your all family.

XYZ

Dear Agnes,
>Thank you for your last letter.It was great to hear from you.Don't be
>angry that I haven't written for so long, BUT I HAD A LOT OF work concerning school.
>
>I've just finished THE first YEAR and now I'm thinking about (liczba mnoga więc bez A)holidays.
>I would like to leave for (przed państwami nie ma the) England.I WAS looking for A job ON the
>Internet and I found a fantastic ONE. (albo I found one which I like very much.)
>
>I'm writing to ask you if I could COME and STAY WITH you for some time.I AM
>planNing TO leave at the beginning of July. I would like TO stay with you
>as long as I haven't found a flat for me. (albo until I find a flat) I hope
>you WILL let me know if THAT's ok with you.
>
>I want you to visit me at the end of holidays.
>
>Give my regards to ALL your family.