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Hi Johnny!
Last week my city Wroclav was afflicted by a hurricane with downpour, which caused a lots of damages. It destroyed fields and houses, teared a trees by its roots, damaged cars and hoardings. Hardly ever didn’t have electricity in home. Traffic signs on intersections were broken. The hurricane drew near unexpectedly, so people had no time for preparations. They were terrified, lift all and ran away, seeked refuge. The hurricane tore a roof of my tower block, so I live in my grandmother’s house. In connection with this I advise you to don’t visit me in fixed due time. When everything will over I invite you to my city. If you want help you can pay money into foundation’s “HELP” account. For your money volunteers will buy blankets, quilts and they’ll overhaul injureds’ houses.

Please write soon,
Kasia
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Hi Johnny!
Last week my city, Wroclav was afflicted by a hurricane with A (tutaj dodalabym tremendous) downpour, which caused 'a lots' LOTS of damagE. It destroyed fields and houses, 'teared a trees' (mowimy uprooted trees) by 'its' THEIR roots, damaged cars and hoardings.
'Hardly ever didn't have electricity in home' (zmien to zdanie - hardly anyone had..).
They were terrified, 'lift' (ale kto? jak 'they, to 'lifted' ale lepiej TOOK everything) all and ran away, 'seeked' (niema takiego slowa - SEEKING refuge. The hurricane tore a roof of my tower block, so NOW I live in my
grandmother's house. In connection with this I advise you 'to don't' (po jakiemu to jest-i znowu to 'don't'-chyba jakis nowy fad-I advise you NOT TO)
visit me 'in fixed due' AT THE ARRANGED time. When everything 'will' IS (albo will be over) over I WILL invite you to my city. If you want TO help you can pay money into THE foundation's “HELP" account. For your money volunteers will buy blankets, quilts and they'll 'overhaul injureds'' (nie - to nie tak - will help with the clean up effort of the DAMAGED) houses.
Dziękuję. :)

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