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There are a lot of stories in the internet, but usually old. I tried to find something new and I think, I’ve succeeded. Brand new story from this year. My goal was to find short story funny and easy to take the bait. It’s from literary forum when people hooked up by writing gather and share their invention. The author of this story in a normal citizen who uploaded it to the site storiesville.com. I was one of many who enjoyed the story. People share with others their writings and users can score stories. This one which I have chosen was quite high marked. I’m not keen on reading so it have been my first time exactly looking for stories in the net. The story I have found is about an old man, who can not admit, that his best time of life passed.

I will make the story closer to you. First of all it is easy to read what I like the most. Huge of dialogs makes it vivid and really grips. It’s without a literal description of nature or persons. The story is simply moving to the point. I believe you know what I mean. Only specific facts. Most people in University of technology appreciate extracts, so short specific stories are for me.

What is it about? So it’s about an old man, elder funny guy. His is against his son and don’t want to listen to him. He behaves like a stubborn child- everything what his son had said, he takes up side down. Old man has hard time living on his own. His best son proposes him moving to a nursing home, but he is a proud man, proud of his freedom so you can figured out his reaction. He decided to show ungrateful son that his is able to interact in the society. After an argument his first thought was- have a beer and get to know some people. For us in nothing special, but for an old man it’s kind of ordeal. During his way to the bar he meets few people and tries to talk with them with better or worse results. It’s shown that his questions and answers mostly don’t fit to the conversation. Funny guy. His thinking also is strange way for young people. When he finally rolls to the bar, he gets opportunity to show his interaction with society and even more. What happened in the bar was quite unusual.

Many elders aren’t properly respected. Our reality demands for us more and more. Having no time is a typical symptom of it. My point is, that people are overworked and can’t take care of their parents like it used to be. So the story is about current state of elder people. What’s more older people can not fit to this word and they behave sometimes strange. I remember my grandparents and our visits. When they started to show their point of view our family had fun in positive meaning, of course.

How to sum up? Reading writings is not my favorite thing to do. Bad memories form polish lessons. I wasn’t interested what the author would like to hand down to the readers, but this story which I have picked up, could be readable and I can recommend it. Humor is modern and it was written by young person so it was easy to interpret. Now after my presentation I am sure, that you are willing to read this story. Just kidding.

There are a lot of stories in the internet, but usually (tu cos brakuje) old.
I tried to find something new and I think THAT I've succeeded. A brand new story
from this year. My goal was to find A 'short story funny' (zla kol slow - prosze dokladnie przemyslec co tutaj masz na mysli) 'and easy to take
the bait' (teog nie rozumiem).
It's from A literary forum 'when' (popraw) people hooked up by writing gather and share their invention (czy inventionS-bo jak people to bedzie ich wiecej).
The author of this story 'in' (ortog) a normal citizen who uploaded it to the site storiesville.com.
People share with others their 'writings' (moze stories?) and users can score 'stories' (tutaj mozesz THESE). 'This' THE one which I have chosen was quite highLY marked. I'm not keen on reading, so it 'have' (chyba nie-blizko ale) been my first time 'exactly' (moze nie to slowo) looking for stories 'in' (ja wole 'on') the net.
The story I have found is about an old man, who cannot admit, that 'his' THE best time of HIS life HAS passed.
First of all it is easy to read AND THIS IS what I like the most. Huge 'of' (niepotr) 'dialogs' (ortog) 'makes' (tutaj l. mn- to MAKE) it vivid and really
gripPING.
Most people 'in' (nie 'in' tylko AT) THE University of Technology
appreciate extracts, so short specific stories are for me.

Widze, ze uzywanie 'a','an','the' jakos Ciebie unika - to niestety trzeba uzywac.

So it's about an old man, 'elder' (nie - AN OLDER funny guy. 'His' (nie - HE is against his son and 'don't' (dlaczego wszyscy uzywacie jakies slangi- DOES NOT) want to listen to him. He behaves like a stubborn child- everything 'what' (nie what - a THAT his son had said, he takes 'up side down' (mozna i moze lepiej - inside out, wrong way round). THE old man has A hard time living on his own. His 'best son' (a ile tych synow ma - ze jeden jest 'best'?) proposes 'him' (nie w tym miejscu) moving HIM to a nursing home, but he is a proud man, proud of his freedom, so you can figurE out his reaction. He decideS to show THE ungrateful son that 'his' HE (dlaczego piszesz his- jak ma byc he?) is able to interact in the society. After an argument his first thought 'was' IS- have a beer and get to know some people. For us IT IS 'in' (po co to 'in') nothing special, but for an old man it's A kind of ordeal. 'During his way' (jabym to zrobila inaczej - While walking) to the bar he meets A few people and tries to talk with them with better or worse results. It's shown that his questions and answers mostly don't fit INto the conversation.
His thinking 'also is' IS ALSO strange 'way' (niepotr) for young people. When he finally rolls to the bar, he gets AN opportunity to show his interaction with society and even more. What happenS in the bar 'was' IS quite unusual.

Many elders 'aren't' (prosze tego nie uzywac - tutaj ARE NOT properly respected. Our reality demands for us more and more (ale czego?).
My point is, that people WHO are overworked and can't take care of their parents like 'it used to be' THEY USE TO. So the story is about current state of Older people.
What's more older people cannot fit INto this 'word'(slowo?) and they 'behave sometimes strange' (zla kol slow - i kto tak uwaza, tutaj mozesz wiecej napisac-co to znaczy 'strange'?).
I remember my grandparents and our visits (to them?). When they started to show their point of view our family had fun in A positive meaning, of course.
Reading 'writings' (czy nie lepiej stories?) is not my 'favorite' (favorite - AmE, favourite-BrE) thing to do. Bad memories 'form' (ej- popraw to) polish lessons.
'Humor' (humor - AmE, humour -BrE) is modern (co TY Mowisz - przeciez tysiace lat temu tez to bylo) and it was written by A young person, so it was easy to interpret. Now after my presentation I am sure, that you 'are' WOULD BE 'willing' (jabym tu uzyla THRILLED) to read this story.

Ekstra, dzięki wielkie. Widać że znasz się na rzeczy :)