Prosiłabym o ocenę poniższej rozprawki pod kątem matury rozsz . Ile otrzymałabym za nią punktów . Chciałabym się zorientować jak ma wyglądać ta idealna rozprawka na wymarzone 18 pkt .
I gdzie mogłabym szukać bardziej wyszukanego słownictwa , które byłoby wysoko punktowane na maturze . Na co powinnam zwrócić uwagę .
Rozprawka została sprawdzona i poprawiona . Dziękuje garstce forumowiczów za pomoc . Naprawdę jestem przeogromnie wdzięczna :)
" Extreme Sports - why they are so popular? "
Nowadays , the extreme sports grow in popularity . In my opinion , the cause of this phenomenon is the fact that these kinds of sports involves much more emotions than normal sports such as basketball or tennis . I will use the following reasons to illustrate my point of view .
First of all , the extreme sports are something brand-new , what until now has been accessible only to a small group of people . As an elite sport , it is attracting more and more people every day . Secondly , the media , especially television , has definitely played its part in increasing the popularity of extreme sports . Many people want to try it or at least watch it because it is trendy . Therefore , I strongly believe that the extreme sports are very popular because thanks to it people are able to overcome their fear and weakness . Moreover , people jumping out of plane , climbing up a rock face without the ropes , diving with no oxygen tanks are under neverenging adrenalin , which makes them feel alive .
On the other hand , this kind of activity is more dangerous then for instance , football or volleyball and therefore ,it can have grave consequences . From minor bruises , to fractured bones , to death .
In conclusion , I am convinced that the extreme sports are very popular because people who practice these kinds of sports are able to gain an incredible experience and people who do not do the extreme sports , do not know what they miss . Everybody should try it at least once and feel the adrenalin .