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Summer school holidays are most beatiful period in pupils life, so I think, that holidays shouldn`t be shorter.
Pupils needs a long holidays. For years we hard work, so like evryone we need free time. Solidly work for twenty month is imposible. Addition pupil doesn`t take only school , he heves hausework too.
Secondly, we must study a lot of things. Shorter holidays doesn`t change this.
I jugde that summer holidays are the best time when pupils may visit world, go abraod, meet new person, visited family. Holidays are party time, party is the best place where tired pupil may relaksed and forgot abouth school problems.
Holidays are necessary for teachers too. Ten months check tests and haomeworks is wery tiring. In the holidays teachers may davot their family and take their hobby.
In the conclusion, I think that summer holidays haven`t be shorter.


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Summer school holidays are THE most 'beatiful' (ortog) 'period' (ale jak masz 'are' to oczekujemy l. mnogiej) in A pupil's life, so I
think, that holidays shouldn`t be ANY shorter.
Pupils 'needs' (needs odnosi sie do 3os.l.poj - a pupils tutaj to l. mn- NEED) 'a' (niepotr) long holidays. For years we 'hard work' (hard work - znaczy ciezka praca, a work hard-ciezko pracujemy), so like 'evryone' (ortog)
we need free time. TO 'Solidly work' (zla kol slow...work..) for 'twenty' (jakie 20?) monthS is 'imposible' (ortog).
IN aAddition A pupil doesn`t ONLY 'take' HAVE school, he 'heves' (nie - tutaj HAS) 'hausework' (ortog) too.
Secondly, we must study a lot of things. Shorter holidays 'doesn`t' (doesn't to znaczy 'does not' - a tutaj DO NOT) change this.
I 'jugde' (ortog) that summer holidays are the best time when pupils may visit
THE world, go 'abraod' (ortog), meet new 'person' (tylko jednego? moze wiecej wtedy PEOPLE) AND visit THE family. Holidays are party time, party is the best place where tired pupil may 'relaksed' (ortog) and 'forgot' (ortog) 'abouth'(ortog) school problems.
Ten months FOR checkING tests and 'haomeworks' (ortog - to jest rzecz. niepol) is 'wery' (ortog) tiring. In the holidays teachers may 'davot' (ortog) (ale co?) FOR their family and 'take' (noe to slowo) their hobby.
In 'the' (niepotr) conclusion, I think that summer holidays 'haven`t' SHOULDN'T be ANY shorter.