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Hi John,
How do you do? Monday 23.06.08r. is my first day in my new job in Inverness. Could I put up to you when I will go to Inverness? Could you buy me a cheapest ticket from London to Inverness? Could I give you money when I'll be in London?
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XYZ

How do you do? Monday 23.06.08r. is my first day in my new job in Inverness. Could I put up to you when I will go to Inverness? Could you buy me a cheapest ticket from London to Inverness? Could I give you money when I'll be in London?




Could you put me up when I go to Inverness? Could I give you money when I'm in London?

Dzięki wielkie, ale dlaczego użyłeś takie czasy?

Zazwyczaj przyszlosc po "when" wyrazamy przez Present Simple albo Present Perfect(kiedy podkreslasz zakonczenie czynnosci)