Opis miejsca: prosba o sprawdzenie

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Last holiday I’ve read in a newspaper about one mysterious castle in my region. I’ve heard about it for the first time. It is called “Hidden castle”. I was very curious how could I find it. So I searched the Net and found a map with it’s location. Next day I set off to explore that place.

The castle is located to the North of my home town Hiddenburg about five kilometres from Hiddentower, which is the highest beauty spot around. It’s very hard to see it, because all over the castle grows forest with tall trees that cover it. I don’t doubt that the caslte was forgotten for ages. However, I think it’s going to change soon

The castle looks very old, but it’s well maintenance. It was build in Midlde Ages. It has a lot of fortification and a big gate. It was surrounded by a moat, but it dried. Indoors is very cold, even in the summer. The walls have to be very wide. There are few chambers, but all are empty. I found a staircase but it was destroy so I couldn’t go to next floor. There are a lot of things to discover yet.

The object has made a big impression on me. It’s wonderful and now I encourage all my friends to visit it. But it needs some work and should be decroate. Than, the casle would like as a new. I can’t wait to visit in one more time. It’s my “Hidden castle”.


Pozdrawiam

'Last holiday' (cos tego poczatku nie lubie - moze inaczej) 'I've' (tutaj wystarczy I READ) read in a newspaper about one mysterious castle in
my region. 'I've' 'I' heard about it for the first time. It is called THE
“Hidden castle".
I was very curious AS TO how could I find it. So I searched the Net and found a map with 'it's' (it's to znaczy IT IS - tutaj nie pasuje - tutaj ITS-jego) location. Next day I set off to explore 'that place' (nie, nie uzywaj tego zwrotu - lepiej ...THE AREA.

It's very hard to see 'it' (niepotr), because all 'over' (nie, zle slowo - tutaj NEARBY, AROUND) the castle grows A forest with tall trees that cover it. I don't doubt that the 'caslte' CASTLE 'was' (lepiej HAD BEEN forgotten for ages.

The castle looks very old, but it's well 'maintenance' (nie, masz tutaj rzeczownik, a potrzeba czas- MAINTAINED). It was build in THE Midlde Ages.
It was surrounded by a moat, but 'it' (tutaj lepiej THAT HAD dried UP.
The walls 'have to be' (tutaj ARE very wide.
I found a staircase, but it was SO destroyED 'so' (niepotr) THAT I couldn't go
to THE next floor UP.

The 'object' (moze lepsze slowo CASTLE?), has made a big impression on me. But it needs some work and IT should be 'decroate' DECORATED. 'Than' THEN the casle would 'like as a new' (nie, nie - tutaj LOOK LIKE NEW.
I can't wait to visit 'in' IT one more time.

Dzieki.