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I have heard recently that younger and younger sportspersons achieve a big success at difference competition. I admire them because I’m conscious how much work thay have put into it. Taking up sport professionally at young age have both pros and cons.

First of all, it’s said that sport shapes our personality. For instance, it teaches competition and gives feeling of self-confident and self-esteem. Thus, sport has great impact on one’s life, especially if it’s taking up professionally. In addition, the world chempions start they career at young age. It’s one of the reason why they achieve successes. Moreover, if young sportsman has a professional couch, there is a big chance that he will become a sportstar in the future.

However, teenagers, who take up sport professionally sometimes give up their education. The haven’t got time to learn and they concencrate only at sport. It’s the whole life for them and they haven’t got any other interests. Furthermore, sport not have to be always healthy for our bodies. At professsional level there are a lot of contusions and brokens. Teenagers who are very ambitious, sometimes overwork their organisms. It can have bad impact on their career and health.

To sum up, I would like to say that I’m in favour of taking up sport professionally by teenagers, but only in moderation. If young sportsman has to choose between education and sport, the decision is easy for me. The school is the most importent or he schould find compromise.



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I have heard recently that younger and younger 'sportspersons' (nie, tutaj SPORTSPEOPLE achieve a big success 'at difference' (cos tu nie tak, czy masz na mysli IN DIFFERENT?) competitionS.
Taking up sport professionally at young age 'have' (HAS-bo to sport-a to 3os.l.poj) both pros and cons.

For instance, it teaches competition and gives A feeling of self-confideCE
and self-esteem. Thus, sport has A great impact on one's life,
especially if it's 'taking' TAKEN up professionally. In addition, the world
'chempions' CHAMPIONS start they career at A young age.
Moreover, if young sportsman has a professional 'couch' (nie, tutaj to inne slowo-couch-to sofa, a tutaj COACH), there is a big chance that he will become a sportstar in the future.

The haven't got time to learn and they 'concencrate' CONCENTRATE only at sport. Furthermore, sport IS not ALWAYS 'have to be always' (niepotr) healthy for
our bodies. At A professsional level there are a lot of contusions and
'brokens' (nie - tutaj BREAKS, albo BROKEN BONES).
'It' (moze lepiej THIS can have bad impact on their career and health.

If A young sportsman has to choose between education and sport, the decision is
easy for me. The school is the most 'importent' IMPORTANT 'or he 'schould' SHOULD find A compromise' (jabym to inaczej,...but there is always a possibility to find a compromise).