Prosze =) nie jest tego duzo :D

Proszę o sprawdzenie tego tekstu ... bardzo proszę xD

Beyoncé Giselle Knowles was born on 4 September 1981 in Houston. She is a great singer and a really good actress. She was a cofounder and an frontwoman in a band Destiny's Child. I love her songs and music. She is a very attractive women. Beyonce is of medium height and well-built. She is very tanned. Her hair is thick, long and curly. She has beautiful big, brown eyes and her lips are full. I don’t know her but in my opinion She is a wonderful person. I think that She is very intelligent, cheerful and confident too.
Beyonce is my favorite singer and I believe that ( i tutaj mialo być ze " i wierze ze tak pozostanie" tylko nie wiem jak to napisać )

Z góry dziękuję za pomoc :*

kilka drobnych poprawek:

on September 4th, 1981
a frontwoman
well-built - to raczej stosuje sie w odniesieniu do kulturysty. moze and has a nice (attractive) figure.
She is very tanned - Beyoncé just murzynka, to raczej nie jest opalenizna tylko kolor skory
I don't know her but, in my opinion, she is a wonderful person
She - czemu z duzej litery?
I believe it will remain that way in the future/ I believe she will continue to be in the future

Wielkie dzięki :*:*