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Nowadays, a lot of women demand to be treated equally with men. They want to practise men's professions, paid the same amount, treated equally at work. In my opinion, equality between men and women should apply for definite sphere of life.( rownosc pomiedzy mezczyznami a kobietami powinna odnosic sie do konkretnych sfer zycia)
Equality means have the same rights, but also have the same duties.

i jeszcze to:
Some day it was thought that women's distinguishing features are competent for house occupying and children parenting. But now, features like self-control or loyalty are required to work, for example as a police officer.

Nowadays, a lot of women demand to be treated equally with men. They want to practise men's professions, PAY the same amounts an BE treated equally at work. In my opinion, equality between men and women should apply for definite sphere of life.( rownosc pomiedzy mezczyznami a kobietami powinna odnosic sie do konkretnych sfer zycia)
Equality means TO have the same rights, but also have the same duties.

Trzy błędy znalazłem.

SOMEDAY it was thought that women's distinguishing features are competent for house occupying and children parenting. But now, features like self-control or loyalty are required FOR work, for example as a police officer.

Rozumiem, ze te cechy sa wymagane W PRACY, chyba ze miales na mysli "dzialanie" jako "work"

tak, chodzilo o to ze te cechy sa wymagane do pracy

Napisz to polsku, bo angielska wersja nie dość że pretensjonalna, to na dodatek pełno w niej błędów.

distinguishing features to np. duży nos albo odstające uszy. I w ogóle to jak "features" mogą być "competent"? competent to może być człowiek a nie "feature".

Nowadays, many women demand equal rights. They want to work in male-dominated professions, earn the same salary, and be treated equally.

pay the same amount - płacić tyle samo. Chyba nie o to ci chodziło?

In my opinion, equality between men and women should apply TO certain spheres of life.
Equality means HAVING the same right and the same duties.

the same rights nie right

pomozcie mi jeszcze wymyslec dlaczego kobiety nie powinny wypelniac sluzby wojskowej...