sprawdzenie tłumaczenia - pilne

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One day of my life.

I usually get up at 6:15 a.m. First I go to the bathroom where I have a shower and brush my teeth. I get dressed. Next I go to the kitchen and I make breakfast for me, my children and my husband. About 7:30 a.m. I go for a walk with my dog. Then I drink coffee and read newspaper. At 8:30 a.m. I leave for work. At 12 o'clock I have lunch. I always finish work at 3 p.m. Sometimes after work I go to the shop to buy something for feed. When I come back home I quickly prepare meals. Later I check e-mail and help my children with homework. At 6 p.m. I watch my favourite serial. Then I eat supper with my family. About 9 p.m. I have a shower and I go sleep at 10 p.m.
Then I drink coffee and read 'A' newspaper.
Sometimes after work I go to the shop to buy something 'for feed' TO EAT.
When I come 'back' (niepotr), mozna tez...when I return home, I) home I quickly prepare 'meals' (czy to 'evening meal'?). Later I check MY e-mail and help my children with homework.