Bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie

After knew requirements of your competition I've decided to take a part in .
I'm study at two colleges. First is a architecture at Warsaw University of Technology. Second is a sculpture at Academy of Fine Arts in Warsaw where I specialize in space and landscape design. I think that my abilities (2D and 3D programm knowledge),
experience (take a part in international workshops) and achievments (awards in competitions) make me a very good applicant for Velux's practice.
My priority is the fastest rational and effectiv devlopment. One of the most important think for me is extension technikal knowledge about modern housing. Velux is a big experience company who is very famous and reputaded. I think that his modern
project office , good furnishing laboratories or internaional specialists team it's a great place to make contacts,
evolution and to gain technikal knowlegde.

After GETTING TO 'knew' KNOW THE requirements of your competition I've decided to take a part in IT.
I'm studyING at two colleges. First is 'a' (niepotr) architecture at Warsaw
University of Technology. Second is 'a' (niepotr) sculpture at Academy of Fine
Arts in Warsaw where I specialize in space and landscape design. I
think that my abilities (2D and 3D programm knowledge), experience (takING 'a' (niepotr) part in international workshops) and 'achievments' (ortog)
(awards in competitions) make me a very good applicant for Velux's
practice.
My priority is the 'fastest' (tutaj quickest) rational and effectivE 'devlopment' (ortog). One of the most important 'think' (think - to myslec, tutaj THINGS) for me is THE extension OF THE 'technikal' (ortog) knowledge about modern housing. Velux is a 'big experience' (troche inaczej...is a company with a wide experience) 'company' (niepotr) 'who' WHICH is very famous and 'reputaded' (nie - nie tak - ...and has a wide reputation). I think that 'his' ITS modern project office, 'good furnishing' (nie, troche inaczej - well equipped) laboratories or internaional
specialists team MAKE IT a 'it's a' (niepotr) great place to make contacts,
'evolution' (nie rozumiem co chcesz tu powiedziec) and to gain 'technikal' (ortog) knowLEDGE.

'evolution' (nie rozumiem co chcesz tu powiedziec)

'Broaden my horizons' might work ?? - Just a thought.

chodzi mi o rozwój po polsku: pozwolą mi ( te praktyki ) rozijać się

daj to co Basia_d napisala.