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Dear Jenny,
how are you? I'm fine. Are you already know where you spend the forthcoming holidays?
My holidays promise to be fantastic!I go at the seaside with my parents and I go also to the village to my grandma and my grandad.
At the seaside me and my parents, we will swim in the sea and play on the beach. We will visit the museums and we will be sunbathing.
In the country, I will be play with my friends. Together we will be fly kites and we will be playing ball. We will be go to the swimming pool too. We are also planning to go for bike trip.
By the end of August I am going to my free time spend in my city. I will be sleeping and relaxing.
I hope the upcoming holidays I will spend great. I can't wait.
Kisses
Aga

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'Are' (dlaczego uzylas 'are'? tutaj DO you already know where you ARE GOING TO spend the forthcoming holidays?
I (a gdzie intencja czasu przyszlego?) go 'at' TO the seaside with my
parents and I (czas przyszly) 'go also' (zla kol slow ALSO GO to the village to my grandma and my grandad.
At the seaside 'me and my parents' (lepiej MY parents and I -, jest przyjete, ze siebie dajemy na drugim miejscu), 'we will swim' (nie - WILL GO SWIMMING in the sea and play on the beach.
In the country, I will be 'play' PLAYING with my friends. Together we will be
flyING kites and we will be playing ball. We will 'be go' (co to? nie rozumiem uzycia 'be') GO to the swimming pool too. We are also planning to go for A bike trip.
By the end of August I am going 'to my free time spend in my city' (zla kol slow...to spend my free time..).
I hope THAT the upcoming holidays I will spend 'great' (nie, prosze o inne slowo).

dziekuję za uwagi:) i za poprawkę

Nie rozumiem dlaczego "We will BE playing..." Czy nie powinno być po prostu "We will playing"?