>I agree with this stereotype only in half part.
...only partly.
I think first
>impression is very important and could tell many things positive and
>negative also.
nie zmieniaj czasu teraźniejszego w przeszły (is - could)
I think that the first impression.......and can tell us many positive and negative things about a person.
I know that big group of people don't care about
>appearance at all and don't fallow a fasion
I know that many people don't care ....don't follow fashion.
for this reason could be
>[źle postrzegane] especially when they search a job in company and
>daily life.
For this reason THEY (w kazdym zdaniu musi byc podmiot) can be perceived wrongly especially when they are searching for a job and even in their daily life.
In my opinion brand of clothes isn't important when
>somebody feels comfortable and look neatly.
...the brand of......and looks neat.
Elegant person [wzbudzają
>zaufanie] and is trample more seriously.
Elegant people inspire confidence and are taken more seriously. Sprawdz w slowniku "trample".
From my point of view
>charakter, appearence and presence could tell all true about other
>man.
literowki
can tell more about other people than their clothes tell us.