do spr...krótkie:)

bardzo prosiłabym o sprawdzenie poniższych zdań:

The best advert for me is add card: Mastercard.
It's very funny, I saw it yesterady evening.
In the add presided three childern. They had packs. They danced and moved so funny. The music was droll. The add it's for people, who want to have some debit cards. It's for older people, not for a children.
Slogan (tej reklamy brzmi): Come back to chum..priceless.
For everything different...pay card: Mastercard!

bardzo proszę o pomoc! to pilne...
z góry dziękuje:)!

The best advert for me is 'add card' (nie, nie tak...the ad for: Mastercard.
It's very funny, I saw it 'yesterady' (ortog) evening.
In the 'add' (ad to tylko jedno 'd'- advert) 'presided' (zle slowo, lepsze slowo to 'featured'...ale wtedy...The ad featured 3...) three childern.
They had 'packs' (tego cos nie rozumiem). They danced and moved 'so funny' (lepiej ...in a funny manner).
The ad 'it's' (nie, - IS for people, who want to have some 'debit' (ale Mastercard to jest Credit card a nie debit card) cards. It's for 'older people' (a dokladniej...tych majacych 90 albo wiecej lat, czy tych mlodszych), not for 'a' (niepotr) children.
Slogan (tej reklamy brzmi): Come back to chum..priceless.
For everything 'different' (czy w tym jest 'different' czy 'else'?)...pay BY 'card' (czy to slowo jest w tym ad?): Mastercard

dzięki wielkie za pomoc!
czy tak jest juz ok:
The best advert for me is add for: MasterCard.
It's very funny, I saw it yesterday evening.
The ad featured three children.
They had knapsack. They danced and moved in a funny manner.
The ad is for people, who want to have some credit cards. It's not for children.
Slogan : Come back to chum - priceless.
For everything else....pay by MasterCard.

Pozdr. i jeszcze raz thnx:*****

The best advert for me is THE 'add' AD for: MasterCard.
The ad featured three (tutaj mozesz dodac...ze one byly male-small) children.
They had knapsackS (l. mn).
(Widzialam to.. The ad jest tez dla rodzicow tych dzieci, zeby po prostu rodzice kupili wszystko, zeby dziecko nie czulo sie inaczej od innych)- napisz to jak umiesz po ang.)