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Every time I travel by train, I’m a little bit disappointed at the condition of the Polish railways. Despite that my dream journey is connected with that means of transport. I’ve always wanted to travel by the Trans-Siberian railway!

On the way I could see many technical human achievements. For example the station in Sljudjanka probably is the only in the world, because it was made almost completely from marble. Equally impressive appear bridges, especially the one which is 3 kilometers long. I won’t travel only above rivers, but also under them. For instance under the Amur river is the tunnel. Of course it will be so fascinated to sightseeing Moscow, Beijing and other amazing cities.

I would love to feel the power of the Siberian nature. The sight of Bajkal lake will remain in my memory forever. Landscapes, which I will see through the train’s window, will incredible and unforgettable. During my trip I will change time zone 8 times!

Although there is so much frozen I will keep warm keepsakes. I want to be an adult because then my dream will come true.
Despite that, my dream journey is connected with that means of transport.
For example the station in Sljudjanka 'probably is' IS PROBABLY the only (ale co?- cos tu brakuje) in the world, because it was made almost completely from marble.
Of course it will be so 'fascinated' to 'sightseeing' (cos tu nie tak..(moze zmien na...Of course I will be fascinated to go sighseeing IN..., albo of course it will be fascinating to go sightseeing IN...) Moscow, Beijing and other amazing cities.
The sight of Bajkal lake 'will remain' (cos tu nie tak...raz piszesz w czasie przeszlym, a raz w przyszlym, zmien to 'will' na WOULD remain) in my memory forever. Landscapes, which I will see through the train's window, will BE incredible and unforgettable.
Although there is so much frozen (ale frozen czego?) I will keep warm keepsakes.
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Break the ice

Every time I travel by train, I’m a little bit disappointed at the condition of the Polish railways. Despite that, my dream journey is connected with that means of transport. I’ve always wanted to travel by the Trans-Siberian railway!

On the way I could see many technical human achievements. For example the station in Sljudjanka is probably the only one of its kind, because it was made almost completely from marble. Equally impressive appear bridges, especially the one which is 3 kilometers long. I won’t travel only above rivers, but also under them. For instance under the Amur river is the tunnel. Of course I will be fascinated to go sightseeing in Moscow, Beijing and other amazing cities.

I would love to feel the power of the Siberian nature. The sight of Bajkal lake would remain in my memory forever. Landscapes, which I will see through the train’s window, will be incredible and unforgettable. During my trip I will change time zone 8 times!

Although there is extremely cold I will keep warm keepsakes. I want to be an adult because then my dream will come true.

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