List nieformalny - wakacje

List dotyczy zeszłych wakacji. Chciałabym żeby ktoś sprawdził go pod względem gramatycznym: czasy, zwroty itp.

Dear Monika,
Thank you for your letter. It was nice to hear from you. And now I’m writing to tell you about my holiday at the seaside in Poland. I had a really great time! You know – going to the beach, sun-bathing, swimming in the sea. It was so amazing! I was there with my parents and my friend Ola. You know her. We stayed in nice hotel near the beach in beautiful small town. There was quite and away from the city. Every day we’re going to the beach and playing volleyball. I think, this holiday was too short and I can’t wait for next summer. I hope, that we go away together.
So, I’m looking forward to seeing you and I’ve been waiting for next letter from you.
Give my regards to your parents.
Take care,
your XYZ.

PS. In next letter I send you a few photos. Maybe You send me too?

We stayed in A nice hotel near the beach in A beautiful small town. There was 'quite' (zle slowo -) and away from the city.
Every day 'we're' (we are - tutaj potrzeba czas przeszly) going to the beach and playing volleyball.
PS. In next letter I WILL send you a few photos. Maybe 'You' (you w srodku zdania piszemy mala litera i to zawsze.) send me (ale co?-) too

1. Może :..small town, but IT was RATHER FAR AWAY from the NEAREST city
2. po I think bez przecinka. Możesz użyć THAT holiday, żeby nie kłócić się z nauczycielką o interpretację.
3. I'LL BE waiting

Moglby ktos tak przestawic ten lesi zeby byl w czasie past simple?