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In today's times the most popular device is a computer. Practically every person has him in house. The computer helps us in work , house, or school. Modern people can't already live without this device, because the computer stood indispensable part of our life.
Firstly, we use computers almost in every situation, on example when we look for some information, work. We can also do purchases by Internet, not going out from house. Becomes this more and more universal. Practically computers execute for us all activity. Even these the simplest which equally well we might make alone. By this, so, we can't develop our imagination, but we kill her . Whole our knowledge, intuition and human skill becomes useless in the face power of computers.
In addition in today's times majority of young people is dependent from computers. They be not able to think they logically, because all the time does this for it is not computer. By this, that they do not think rationally and their imagination does not act they are jeopardize on the dangerous, what carries virtual world.
Summing up computers will kill our imagination effectively. More and more young people can't think by oneself, because living in imaginary virtual world they lose feeling reality. Personally I believe, that that will alter.

>In today's times the most popular device is a computer.
Razi mnie w oczy to "in today's times". Nie tłumacz dosławnie (bo pewnie chodziło Ci o 'w dzisiejszych czasach'). Poprawnie by brzmiało:
Todays, the most popular device is a computer.

>Firstly, we use computers almost in every situation, on example when we look for some information, work.
FOR EXAMPLE nie !on example!

>We can also do purchases by Internet, not going out from house.
Lepiej: Also, we can doing shoping by the Internet, don't go out form home.

>Becomes this more and more universal.
Become this is more universal.
Nie trzeba powtarzać 'more and more' :P

By this, so, we can't develop our imagination, but we kill her.
Bez 'so'. "Kill her" (drastyczna jesteś :P)

>In addition in today's times majority of young people is dependent from computers.
Ten sam błąd co na początku... In addition, todays majority...

By this, that they do not think rationally...
they don't nie !do not!

I jeszcze kilka podobnych błędów tj. powyżej w ostatnim akapicie ;)

Pzdr.

Dzięki :) Coś nie chce mi się wierzyć że zrobiłam tylko tyle błędów :P :)

Mam nadzieje, ze rzeczywiscie starasz sie pomoc, ale twoja poprawka jest pelna straszliwych bledow, czesto duzo gorszych od wesjii autora:

>Todays, the most popular device is a computer.
Nie todays tylko today, nowadays, theses days...

>We can also do purchases by Internet, not going out from house.
>Lepiej: Also, we can doing shoping by the Internet, don't go out form home.

To zdanie nie ma absolutnie sensu! Pierwsze jest duzo lepsze. Moze byc tak:
We can also make purchases on the Internet (on-line) and don't have to go out of our homes (albo without leaving our homes).

Niestety nie mam w tej chwili czasu poprawic calosci, ale twoja wersja niestety nie nadaje sie do niczego.

anitaaa.
PROSZE TEGO wiecej nie robic. Ja stracilam swoj cenny czas poprawiajac ten sam tekst pare minut tego, ALE TY, jestes az tak niecierpliwa, ze zamiast poczekac, az ktos poprawi 1szy post, wklejasz to drugi raz.
Drugi raz zostawie to osobie ktora teraz Ci to przetlumaczyla (bledy and all...)

Nowadays the most popular device is a computer. Practically everybody has it at home. Computers help us at work , house, or school. Modern people can't live without this device, because the computer bacame an indispensable part of our life.
First of all, we use computers almost in every situation, for example when we look for some information or work. We can also make purchases on-line, without leaving our homes. it's becoming more and more universal. Practically computers execute for us all activities. Even the simplest ones which we can do ouselves. Becouse of thhis we can't develop our imagination and we kill it, as well as our knowledge and intuition. Human skills become useless because of the powerful computers.
In addition, nowadays majority of young people is dependent from computers. They are not able to think logically, because the computer does it for them. That's why they do not think rationally and their imagination does not work in a proper way and it's jeopardized by the dangers of the virtual world.
Summing up, sooner or later computers will kill our imagination effectively. More and more young people can't think by themselves, because by living in the imaginary virtual world they lose the meaning of our reality. Personally I believe, that that will alter.

tez to na szybko zrobilam ale mam nadzieje ze pomoglam

Dziękuję Fericzka i Terri !!
Terri przepraszam.. już tak nigdy nie zrobię :).